The very beginning the article states why bullying is an issue. It continues to explain what exactly it means to bully or be bullied. It explains weather bullying is common, and what type of effects it has on kids in today’s society. After reading the article it tied up all of the loose ends. There wasn’t much more to ask for. The author did a well job at covering multiple different aspects when it comes to the topic of bullying. Along with that, another good strength for the article is the statistics page. There are several different articles with statistics dealing with all different types of harassment. Choosing a brief article, it reads “The bullying statistics 2010 reveal that bullying is a crime that is not going away anytime soon. There are about 160,000 children that miss school every day out of fear of being bullied. Bullying statistics 2010 also report an increase in cyberbullying activities.” (Statistics) The author of the article uses the statistics as the evidence, which works but personal evidence could be included to make it end with a wow
The very beginning the article states why bullying is an issue. It continues to explain what exactly it means to bully or be bullied. It explains weather bullying is common, and what type of effects it has on kids in today’s society. After reading the article it tied up all of the loose ends. There wasn’t much more to ask for. The author did a well job at covering multiple different aspects when it comes to the topic of bullying. Along with that, another good strength for the article is the statistics page. There are several different articles with statistics dealing with all different types of harassment. Choosing a brief article, it reads “The bullying statistics 2010 reveal that bullying is a crime that is not going away anytime soon. There are about 160,000 children that miss school every day out of fear of being bullied. Bullying statistics 2010 also report an increase in cyberbullying activities.” (Statistics) The author of the article uses the statistics as the evidence, which works but personal evidence could be included to make it end with a wow