I was very pleased to hear you speak at the California State University of Northridge, at the event of State of the City Address. You addressed the citizens of Los Angeles with valid information and phenomenal numbers of what you have inspired to our city. Hearing you speak was pleasant and assuring that I have such a great mayor who cares about his city so much and that my family and I have a well established city for us and our future. You used a great collaboration of ethic appeal that gave us a background of the things you have done, a great logical understandings of why Los Angeles has improved and why you are doing these things, and an emotional appeal to the hard road we Los Angeles citizens have had. Your voice projection was loud and
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It was a good idea that you used logical reasons from the beginning especially after the story you started about the parents that do not like the trash around there children at school. You stated, “City Hall needs to respond to your needs, and to meet those needs on the street, by cleaning the streets and keeping it clean for the youth.” That itself covered the reason behind why you did all these things such as the trash cans. You gave a logical reason of why you are doing this and why we should believe you want to this. You also gave us a background of the whole LA Strong hashtag and why we do it, and I like how you said, “When we help a woman escape a violent home or when we help a young man avoid crime, we make LA Strong.” This was a strong intelligent and logical reasoning of why it is your main priority to make LA …show more content…
You might have over done it little a bit because you kept mentioning the earthquake of Northridge in 1994. At first when you mentioned it and used emotional words such as, devastated, which brought the crowd back to 1994, but after a couple times it got boring and it seemed like that was your fallback when you were losing your audience. I believe when you were closing your story you told a story about a young man named Manquan who escaped a bullet and decided to rebuild his community. This was a great example of the change of youth because of your service as mayor and the emotional story gave a clear reason why your actions have cleaned our city up. The speech was great and gave the audience valid points of why you as mayor was the greatest choice for every Angelinos. You might have lacked in your emotional appeal to the audience but you destroyed it by giving us logical reasoning and your ethical appeals to your hard solid facts. I am proud to have such a Mayor who cares about Los Angeles like I do and wants to keep it clean and safe for us and future generations. I believe with the adjustments i told you about, you can improve your speech and wow your audience next time because of your deep voice and solid voice
It was a good idea that you used logical reasons from the beginning especially after the story you started about the parents that do not like the trash around there children at school. You stated, “City Hall needs to respond to your needs, and to meet those needs on the street, by cleaning the streets and keeping it clean for the youth.” That itself covered the reason behind why you did all these things such as the trash cans. You gave a logical reason of why you are doing this and why we should believe you want to this. You also gave us a background of the whole LA Strong hashtag and why we do it, and I like how you said, “When we help a woman escape a violent home or when we help a young man avoid crime, we make LA Strong.” This was a strong intelligent and logical reasoning of why it is your main priority to make LA …show more content…
You might have over done it little a bit because you kept mentioning the earthquake of Northridge in 1994. At first when you mentioned it and used emotional words such as, devastated, which brought the crowd back to 1994, but after a couple times it got boring and it seemed like that was your fallback when you were losing your audience. I believe when you were closing your story you told a story about a young man named Manquan who escaped a bullet and decided to rebuild his community. This was a great example of the change of youth because of your service as mayor and the emotional story gave a clear reason why your actions have cleaned our city up. The speech was great and gave the audience valid points of why you as mayor was the greatest choice for every Angelinos. You might have lacked in your emotional appeal to the audience but you destroyed it by giving us logical reasoning and your ethical appeals to your hard solid facts. I am proud to have such a Mayor who cares about Los Angeles like I do and wants to keep it clean and safe for us and future generations. I believe with the adjustments i told you about, you can improve your speech and wow your audience next time because of your deep voice and solid voice