Sheri Bixby That Beautiful Moment Analysis

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In the narrative essay, “That Beautiful Moment”, author Lori Bixby tells the story of the night her twin sister gave birth. Bixby starts her paper by being woken up in the early morning and being told to hurry to the hospital. She tells of the anxiety and excitement that fills the room as her sister goes into labor. After several hours, the baby comes and Bixby feels gracious that the baby came safely and also feels gratitude for not only her mother’s sacrifices for her and her sister but the miracle of life itself. Bixby tells a story of her, “beautiful moment”, a first for her and her twin sister: the miracle of a child being born. In this narrative essay, Bixby succeeds in using pathos to convey her feelings of anxiety, nervousness, and

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