For my Redesign Project, I chose key points on how I could emphasize the importance of why we need more females in law enforcement agencies. The tone has change from my original document because now I am trying to persuade law enforcement agencies on why they need more females to work for them. I want to make it apparent that we need more females because they are beneficial to our community. Females have different techniques in policing than males have by using communication instead of excessive force. According to statistics, males use more excessive force and are accounted with more lawsuits and complaints from the community. Therefore, women could be beneficial by using communication skills instead of using excessive force, which will lower the amount of lawsuits. Most females do not choose to become a police officer because of how dangerous the job can be. Women do not have the physical ability to protect themselves and this puts their lives in danger. There have been numerous female police officers have been taken advantage of and brutally killed because they do not have enough training to react to someone who is twice their size. Police agencies should put more emphasis on training police officers on police tactics and how to properly defend themselves in a
For my Redesign Project, I chose key points on how I could emphasize the importance of why we need more females in law enforcement agencies. The tone has change from my original document because now I am trying to persuade law enforcement agencies on why they need more females to work for them. I want to make it apparent that we need more females because they are beneficial to our community. Females have different techniques in policing than males have by using communication instead of excessive force. According to statistics, males use more excessive force and are accounted with more lawsuits and complaints from the community. Therefore, women could be beneficial by using communication skills instead of using excessive force, which will lower the amount of lawsuits. Most females do not choose to become a police officer because of how dangerous the job can be. Women do not have the physical ability to protect themselves and this puts their lives in danger. There have been numerous female police officers have been taken advantage of and brutally killed because they do not have enough training to react to someone who is twice their size. Police agencies should put more emphasis on training police officers on police tactics and how to properly defend themselves in a