Taylor Woods
9/29/2015
Argumentative Writing
Look at the water its so beautiful with its ocean blue color, but wait what's black tar substance coming from the east. What is it? You may say nothing, but oil coming from that pipe over there. Its ok as long as you don't go in the water then its fine, but look over there at that hill are those sea lions going in the water. You may look at yourself and say " How are we going to stop this?' Well for started we can make sure are pipes safe so it wouldn't leak. Also help prevent oil spills.
So lets talk about the main topic oil spills. Oil spill can happen out of nowhere even right a pipe is ready to burst. Like in California a pipe ruptured and spill about 100,000 gallons of oil in the ocean. Causing a lot of sea lions to be injured or starved because of the oil. Or that time in Waikiki over 500,000 gallons of sewage was dumped in the ocean. Making lifeguards warn people to not go in the water. But …show more content…
In Hawaii at least 19 islands received a massive amount of trash washing up shore. Most of the beaches are buried in plastic making it impossible to clean. Its even worse some scientist found different types of toxins in our drinking water which would cause health problems in the future. Not only health problems but new disease or super bugs that will harm the both environment. The U.S. Environmental Protection Agency monitors 80 different contaminants that may affect our drinking water like microbial. Microbial is a virus and bacteria form into one which can cause people with weak immune system to be seriously ill. Also health risk can harm the marine life a large amount of otters are poison by toxin called microcrystin. In addition there's so much plastic in the water that 100 of plastic bags were in a sperm whale because it could of thought it was food or swallow on accident. either way it will still damage the ocean no matter
9/29/2015
Argumentative Writing
Look at the water its so beautiful with its ocean blue color, but wait what's black tar substance coming from the east. What is it? You may say nothing, but oil coming from that pipe over there. Its ok as long as you don't go in the water then its fine, but look over there at that hill are those sea lions going in the water. You may look at yourself and say " How are we going to stop this?' Well for started we can make sure are pipes safe so it wouldn't leak. Also help prevent oil spills.
So lets talk about the main topic oil spills. Oil spill can happen out of nowhere even right a pipe is ready to burst. Like in California a pipe ruptured and spill about 100,000 gallons of oil in the ocean. Causing a lot of sea lions to be injured or starved because of the oil. Or that time in Waikiki over 500,000 gallons of sewage was dumped in the ocean. Making lifeguards warn people to not go in the water. But …show more content…
In Hawaii at least 19 islands received a massive amount of trash washing up shore. Most of the beaches are buried in plastic making it impossible to clean. Its even worse some scientist found different types of toxins in our drinking water which would cause health problems in the future. Not only health problems but new disease or super bugs that will harm the both environment. The U.S. Environmental Protection Agency monitors 80 different contaminants that may affect our drinking water like microbial. Microbial is a virus and bacteria form into one which can cause people with weak immune system to be seriously ill. Also health risk can harm the marine life a large amount of otters are poison by toxin called microcrystin. In addition there's so much plastic in the water that 100 of plastic bags were in a sperm whale because it could of thought it was food or swallow on accident. either way it will still damage the ocean no matter