Personal Narrative: When John Kills

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Growing up John and his family lived in Louisiana a small town just right outside New Orleans. His family had always said he was a very optimistic young man doing any sort of job he could do until he could actually get a real job. John knew exactly what he wanted to do when he was older. He wanted to be a doctor so right out of High School he went straight into NYU in New York the next year. He finished college and was looking for a doctor job now that he was legal to be a doctor. He was offered a job in a small clinic on the outskirts of New York.

He had been working at the clinic for about 6 months and then the manager decided to show him the rest of the place. He took John down to the basement and showed him a secret operating room. John
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John went back to the bar a few days later and then was approached by a tall dark haired well dressed man. The man talked to John and asked him about his work and when John responded the man was surprised. He asked if he knew about what the manager did and John said “ummmm sorta why do you ask?” The man said that is where he kills his victims. The man said “I will pay you 100,000 dollars to kill him, he is a very bad man that doesn’t deserve to live.” John was very interested in the offer because that is a lot of money. He accepted and the man said “good good you will be paid as soon as the job is …show more content…
So he did, he turned down all calls and told them he is done. He took Maddie to a very nice restaurant and proposed with a yellow lab just 8 weeks old obviously she said yes because they were madly in love. They started to build a new house outside LA and had his weapons buried under the house so he couldn't kill as easily. The house took 6 months to build. It was a very nice house 2 stories, 4 rooms, and 3 and a half baths. Their wedding was set for June 25th. It was June 17th Maddie went out with her friends to have fun while John went with his friends. When he got home he got a call from Maddie’s friend she said “there was a wreck Maddie died.” John balled his eyes out even though he is a tough man. He was reminded every day of her by the

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