However although the plot was strong, the plot took to long to develop and the main problem was over too quickly. The plot should have had a longer part in the story, instead the author was more focused on tiny unnecessary details like explaining that Jinx could talk to trees by feeling their roots. Moreover, the author did not have to explain that Jinx finds a farseeing window and talks to a girl with a red hood, because it did not contribute to the plot at all. Some troubling issues I had with this book was I didn't quite understand what the “clearing” of the Urwald was, but inferring from what it sounds like I assumed it was the part of the Urwald where there was no forest. I think the author should elaborate on the setting more because I did not have a clear understanding, and I could not really envision the story since no sensory detail was included. The only description of what Urwald looked like was “the path where it twisted between great
However although the plot was strong, the plot took to long to develop and the main problem was over too quickly. The plot should have had a longer part in the story, instead the author was more focused on tiny unnecessary details like explaining that Jinx could talk to trees by feeling their roots. Moreover, the author did not have to explain that Jinx finds a farseeing window and talks to a girl with a red hood, because it did not contribute to the plot at all. Some troubling issues I had with this book was I didn't quite understand what the “clearing” of the Urwald was, but inferring from what it sounds like I assumed it was the part of the Urwald where there was no forest. I think the author should elaborate on the setting more because I did not have a clear understanding, and I could not really envision the story since no sensory detail was included. The only description of what Urwald looked like was “the path where it twisted between great