For the multimodal essay I chose to use my first essay on “Modern Day Manifest Destiny”. Essay one was very essential for me to become the writer I am now. I think choosing this essay will demonstrate careful preparation and effort because this was an essay that I cared a lot about. My argument was centered on the idea that Manifest Destiny still exists and is being practiced in modern day society. Choosing this essay for me means finally dealing with my obstacles as a writer which is using my sources effectively enough to support my argument, tying the examples back to my overall argument, and sentence clarity. After receiving the final grade on my essay I was very discourage in fact irate at the comments and suggestions given …show more content…
I then looked for sentence clarity to make sure that my points were being brought across in an effective way. In one of my body paragraphs I took out the many places where I cited my sources because it was very excessive. I also changed my citations within the sentence because I was so confused about the proper way of citing my source. Placing my body paragraph into my presentation was definitely easier once I first made the revisions. Since my thesis was, “By knowing the history of Manifest Destiny in America it is clear that it is still prevalent today, as seen in the Iraq war and continuing in the current academic conversations”, I decided to place important information that many people might not know about my topic. Also using the history in my presentation helped to support my argument and establish ethos and logos. Then I compared two photos, one of the original images of Manifest Destiny, and the other of a cartoon modern day interpretation of Manifest Destiny. Using both of the very different photos side by side in my presentation also helped to bring my interpretation of Manifest Destiny as still present in modern society across to my