Firstly, I will look into the narcissism of the people portrayed in this piece. The only thing thought of by these people are themselves. The reasons given for abstaining form having children are that the adults involved want to have “me” time with each other or they want to be free to spend their money however they want. The worst excuse is that they don't want the responsibilities associated with a child. (Although …show more content…
Both personal belief and legitimate medical cases, but instead of an unbiased opinion, she gives a slanted view, playing on the reader's emotional state. In one section of the text she states, “A close friend of mine desperately desired to be a mother, but because she is a carrier of an always-fatal type of Muscular Dystrophy, she opted to remain childless (Welch pg.282 p7).” This tone carries throughout this piece, letting the audience presume that she endorses this choice. To avoid biased writing, she could include that one could adopt, or engage an egg donor and receive in vitro