Analysis Of The Story ' The Climax ' Essay
2) I want to pay particular attention to the climax of the story. In my original version of the story, the climax isn’t very clear, nor does it have any kind of focus. The climax is vey short, and the protagonist quickly makes a choice. It doesn’t feel like it’s the character’s low point. I want to build this part of the story up, so when the character makes a decision it seems more pivotal in the story.
3) I want to enhance the acceleration of my story. In the original story, the acceleration did not build towards the climax. The acceleration was very short, and quickly reached the climax. It didn’t contain many details. I want to expand on this part of the story, to make it fuller and allow the ending to feel less rushed.
4) Another point my friends brought up about my story is trying to do a lot in with the word limit I have. They suggested simplifying my character’s motivation so I can cut out more elements out of the story,…