He does use himself as an example, but in a sarcastic and clipped way instead of an open and honest one. “Your heart attack drives up the cost of my premiums and office visits. And if the government is paying for my anti-cholesterol medication, what incentive is there for me to put down the cheeseburger?” (Balko, 467). This negative tone, once again sets his audience on the defense. No one enjoys hearing how they have hurt others, especially people they do not know, so throwing these accusations in the face of his audience hurts even his supporters. He bumbles on by telling us, “This collective ownership of private health then paves the way for even more federal restrictions on consumer choice and civil liberties” (468). He gives no illustration for this outside of claiming the options inside supermarkets would change. Balko’s attacks on his readers do little to endear him to them; instead he continues to fan the
He does use himself as an example, but in a sarcastic and clipped way instead of an open and honest one. “Your heart attack drives up the cost of my premiums and office visits. And if the government is paying for my anti-cholesterol medication, what incentive is there for me to put down the cheeseburger?” (Balko, 467). This negative tone, once again sets his audience on the defense. No one enjoys hearing how they have hurt others, especially people they do not know, so throwing these accusations in the face of his audience hurts even his supporters. He bumbles on by telling us, “This collective ownership of private health then paves the way for even more federal restrictions on consumer choice and civil liberties” (468). He gives no illustration for this outside of claiming the options inside supermarkets would change. Balko’s attacks on his readers do little to endear him to them; instead he continues to fan the