John Taylor's Draft Analysis

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1. What is working well in Taylor’s draft?
• Taylor provides ample examples leading up to her thesis such as the Rosa Parks refusal to give up her seat, Martin Luther King Jr.’s speeches, Elizabeth Ecckford and Little Rock. All of these to start leading her reader to follow her path to her argument, because then she addresses question that aren’t answered in today’s textbooks such as what happened to the Little Rock Nine, or that Rosa Parks was a part of the NAACP, or that A. Philip Randolph actually planned the million-man march. She brings up these tidbits of information to support her thesis which is a logical path because now her readers understand how she’s gotten there.
2. What is Taylor’s thesis or argument?
• Taylor’s argument is that

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