Extended Metaphors In My Papa's Waltz By Roethke

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In “My Papa’s Waltz,” Roethke uses an extended metaphor, but uses different language to describe it as the poem is read. “My Papa’s Waltz” has the metaphor of dancing throughout the poem, more correctly, waltzing between a father and son. Everything from the description of the fluidity of the dance to the speakers feeling towards the dance helps create a stronger meaning behind the metaphor. Roethke uses dancing as a metaphor for the relationship between the son and the father, according to the son. Roethke is also able to create a unique atmosphere with his word choice. He emphasizes small details throughout the poem, which allows the reader to picture a sharper image. Roethke especially emphasizes the father’s hands, the father’s breath and …show more content…
For example, after the pots fall from the shelf because of their dance, Roethke writes “My mother’s countenance/Could not unfrown itself.” (line 7 and 8) Although the word romped gives the action a negative connotation, it means to play roughly and energetically. Stanza two also gets a negative connotation because the mother is unhappy with their actions. Tying in this stanza with the underlying metaphor, the mother may be unhappy with their relationship only once something goes wrong. Roethke uses stanza two to convey the idea that they father and son got along at one point until something …show more content…
In both cases, Roethke describes the hands of a laborer or fighter. Stanza three describes the hands as “battered on one knuckle” and stanza four outlines the hands as “caked hard by dirt.” (lines 10 and 14) Both quotes elicit the idea that the father lives a rough life, filled with fighting and hard work. The imagery of the father’s hands adds to the metaphor because it creates the father to be a rugged individual. Roethke also references the child hanging onto the father twice throughout the poem. Both instances create the idea that the son has been striving to keep a relationship with his father, even though it has hurt him and made the mother sad at

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