The second tweet she used was from a student, Allie Wilkinson, which read, “When the majority of your college friends tell you about a sexual assault or rape and you wonder when it will happen to you #yesallwomen,” (Vendituoli 77). Here Vendituoli tries to appeal to the reader through her use of technological trends in society which would have been effective, if she hadn’t lacked explanation, leaving her readers confused. Jumping from tweet-to-tweet with nothing but a brief summary and no analysis, could have been her strategy to make the reader think about the significance of each, but it gave the reader no direction, which lead to a blurred comprehension of the text. Most of her essay is quoting others, whether it is students or teachers,
