The author utilizes enjambment through the poem as a whole, Olds conveys the determination of the character is experiencing by purposely extending the sentences. The never ending sentence creates suspension, and emphasize the journey that is taking place in the poem.
Olds implements an allusion from Mark 10:25, the author states "...I turned sideways and slipped through the needles eye, and then I walked down the aisle toward my father..." The author compares the characters action to that