She first published her article in 2006 in an online magazine. She focuses on the way rappers depict black women in their music in a disrespectful manner. Mclune uses multiple examples of this kind of behavior. This persuasive article’s goal was to grab the attention of its readers and specifically bash male rappers for their disrespectful acts towards women. Strong use of rhetorical appeals are very important in a persuasive text. She does manage to use rhetorical appeals, but they only limit to one type and are outweighed by logical fallacies and Mclune’s criticizing of rappers. Mclune also uses a significant amount of Kevin Powell’s ideas, who is another author that defends male rappers in his article. The majority of her article was disagreeing with Powell’s points. Mclune’s article does have the potential to become a very strong piece if she used and balanced all three of the rhetorical appeals and did not include the overuse of logical fallacies. If Mclune did succeed in this idea, her audience would have posed the question of which rappers actually degrade black women in their music? Instead, the question that lies is, do all rappers degrade black
She first published her article in 2006 in an online magazine. She focuses on the way rappers depict black women in their music in a disrespectful manner. Mclune uses multiple examples of this kind of behavior. This persuasive article’s goal was to grab the attention of its readers and specifically bash male rappers for their disrespectful acts towards women. Strong use of rhetorical appeals are very important in a persuasive text. She does manage to use rhetorical appeals, but they only limit to one type and are outweighed by logical fallacies and Mclune’s criticizing of rappers. Mclune also uses a significant amount of Kevin Powell’s ideas, who is another author that defends male rappers in his article. The majority of her article was disagreeing with Powell’s points. Mclune’s article does have the potential to become a very strong piece if she used and balanced all three of the rhetorical appeals and did not include the overuse of logical fallacies. If Mclune did succeed in this idea, her audience would have posed the question of which rappers actually degrade black women in their music? Instead, the question that lies is, do all rappers degrade black