b. Intro to a quote/paraphrase: Domestic violence can transpire in any situation, no matter what race, age, religion, or economic status the parties are in. The offenders of these crimes feel as if they have a right to control the victims, these actions are a choice by the perpetrator and are unjustifiable.
c. A quote or paraphrase (with citation): A report published in 2004, ‘Intimate Partner Violence in Oregon” published by the Oregon Department of Public Health stated that women …show more content…
Transition sentence: This creates an establishment of supremacy and gives women little possibility to escape these predicaments.
VII. Conclusion
a. Re-state thesis: Domestic violence causes mental disorders such as depression and post-traumatic stress disorder.
b. Summarizing point 1: These actions are an unfortunate reoccurring event in America each day. Millions of men and women are affected by these actions in our country. Women’s coalitions, battery shelters, and abuse hotlines have been in placed into effect to minimize these atrocities, but it takes more to put a true end to the epidemic
c. Summarizing point 2: Often children are damaged the most by these activities. They have harder times processing and understanding the seriousness of what is happening and don’t realize it until later in life. Usually, it is too late before they realize it and have already taken the wrong paths.
d. Summarizing entire essay: Domestic violence has a tremendous effect on the victims and eyewitness that last for a boundless amount of time. This recovery takes a great deal of time and money to recuperate from. Unfortunately, in some cases the pain is too great and ruins people’s lives. They either remain in an abusive relationship until it ultimately kills them or they never dealt with it and turned to drugs and alcohol and lost years of their