Concussions are a major public health issue, and particularly so in the setting of sports. Millions of athletes of all ages may face the risks of concussion and repeat concussion. A concussion is a clinical syndrome of symptoms and signs occurring after biomechanical force is imparted to the brain. This kind of injury is something you would want to prevent from happening so always do what is suppose to be done.
Thesis Statement: Concussions in sports have had a profound effect on athletes, which is why concussions assessment should continue to prevent player safety and should reduce less head-on contact.
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Topic Sentence: Concussions are very common in contact sports which is why concussions assessment should continue to prevent player safety.
Supporting Evidence #1: The article states, “Live contact during …show more content…
Explanation: The equipment you use for football protects athletes, but if you use it wrong it may harm you so coaches should teach you the proper technique to hit an opponent and coaches also parents should teach good sportsmanship to minimize unnecessary aggression on the field.
Conclusion: All things considered, it seems that concussions can be a big effect on athletes careers. Football leagues have been eliminating things to prevent brain injuries to athletes. As leagues improve football will still be a physical and risky sport but will have less head injuries which can lead to a bad concussion which isn’t a joke because it’s different types of concussions. Why not avoid the headache of litigation and meet at the 50-yard line? Creation of a relief fund seems a much more time and money efficient way to resolve this headache for all parties
Thesis Statement: Concussions in sports have had a profound effect on athletes, which is why concussions assessment should continue to prevent player safety and should reduce less head-on contact.
Body Paragraph #1
Topic Sentence: Concussions are very common in contact sports which is why concussions assessment should continue to prevent player safety.
Supporting Evidence #1: The article states, “Live contact during …show more content…
Explanation: The equipment you use for football protects athletes, but if you use it wrong it may harm you so coaches should teach you the proper technique to hit an opponent and coaches also parents should teach good sportsmanship to minimize unnecessary aggression on the field.
Conclusion: All things considered, it seems that concussions can be a big effect on athletes careers. Football leagues have been eliminating things to prevent brain injuries to athletes. As leagues improve football will still be a physical and risky sport but will have less head injuries which can lead to a bad concussion which isn’t a joke because it’s different types of concussions. Why not avoid the headache of litigation and meet at the 50-yard line? Creation of a relief fund seems a much more time and money efficient way to resolve this headache for all parties