Upon initially reading the passage, I could clearly hear the soft pants and sniffs of the small dogs within the enclosed elevator space. The image painted in my head was of a dog walker, with their large entourage of small city puppies, and the condensation forming on the mirrors as a result of their collective panting. The excitement of the small trembling dogs can be felt in the closed off space, as the adorable sounds of wet noses quietly snuffling engulfs the elevator space. This image was one of the more powerful ones I envisioned while reading this poem, as my personal love for dogs allowed the author’s depiction to become much more realistic for me. Especially upon the word snuffling, which I felt to be an extremely perfect fit for the scenario, the sense of realism and sarcastic bitterness truly resonated with me as a reader. The use of the soft, clumsy sounding word snuffling juxtaposed with the noun garbage really added to the image of the drooling, slow
Upon initially reading the passage, I could clearly hear the soft pants and sniffs of the small dogs within the enclosed elevator space. The image painted in my head was of a dog walker, with their large entourage of small city puppies, and the condensation forming on the mirrors as a result of their collective panting. The excitement of the small trembling dogs can be felt in the closed off space, as the adorable sounds of wet noses quietly snuffling engulfs the elevator space. This image was one of the more powerful ones I envisioned while reading this poem, as my personal love for dogs allowed the author’s depiction to become much more realistic for me. Especially upon the word snuffling, which I felt to be an extremely perfect fit for the scenario, the sense of realism and sarcastic bitterness truly resonated with me as a reader. The use of the soft, clumsy sounding word snuffling juxtaposed with the noun garbage really added to the image of the drooling, slow