With Parnell’s father being the richest man in town it meant that Parnell could do whatever he pleased without anyone saying a word to him. Most of the people who live in town, rent their homes from Homer Caraway. In addition, they also buy their food from his grocery store. They know better than to cross him. If you so much as look at Homer Caraway the wrong way, he will make your life miserable.
In my opinion, the first sentence needed to be reconstructed to simplify and clarify the content. I felt the second sentence was a run on sentence; with the sentence separated with periods instead of commas it brought more emphasis to the point that the town was completely dependent upon Homer Caraway. The last sentence of this paragraph seemed to
In my opinion, the first sentence needed to be reconstructed to simplify and clarify the content. I felt the second sentence was a run on sentence; with the sentence separated with periods instead of commas it brought more emphasis to the point that the town was completely dependent upon Homer Caraway. The last sentence of this paragraph seemed to