Important Note Things to focus on: Punctuation, grammar, spelling, tenses, other technical things Making it shorter to fit the page limit Thank you so much for taking the time off to edit this! Much appreciated! Prologue She lifted her cards. Lily glanced through them, and slid a two of clubs across the table. She tried to disguise her smirk when one of her opponents handed her a four of diamonds in return. The game quickly accelerated intobecame a flurry of red and black. All too soon, Lily slapped down an impressive string of cards. The other three men at the (describe table) stiffened and took no effort to hide their gasps. Lily scooped up her winnings in one fluid motion, and practically strutted out the door. She just about lived off of poker, and was considered the best one around. “Little Lily”, “Loner Lily”, “Loopy Lily”. Those were the names of her past; not anymore. As soon as she had put some distance between her and the men, Lily dropped her cover. She hummed an odd tune as she stumbled down the cobblestone street, her eyes brimming with tears. She walked away from her life as a poker legend, away from the grand casino, away from cards. ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ Lily walked nervously up to the front desk of the library. She was terrified by the prospect of speaking to the head librarian. Her classmate Abigail once tried to ask where the dictionaries were located. The result wasn't very pretty.…
Playing sports has always been a passion of mine.I played Pop Warner Football until I broke my foot in third grade. After my foot healed, I decided to play soccer because my my cousin played and I wanted to try it . Ever since I started playing soccer, I have always my hardest and strived to get better. All summer I worked with my friend Imanol practicing hard to make sure we made the team. Our hard work payed off and we both made the team. The upcoming season was the going to be the best and…
Reality of High School As you go through life, people in this world make many mistakes but also learn tons of lessons. Some don’t mature fast enough to know they’ve made mistakes and some are taught a lesson but have never actually learned it. Luckily, I had a major reality check in February of last year causing me to realize that the importance of high school is figuring out the type of person you want to be. Every girl knows the story or the movie of the popular girl in school that every…
USAREUR G-1, APO AE 09014 SUBJECT: Request Tour Extension for Mr. Patrick L. Lum, Supply Technician, GS-2005-05, TSAE, RTSD East, TSC Ansbach 1. This employee will have completed seven years of civilian foreign area service in a DOD position in the competitive service without the required interruption on 19 December 2017. Request a twenty-four month overseas tour extension, with a new DEROS of 19 December 2019. The employee does not have return rights. a. Mr. Patrick L. Lum b. TSC…
A. Commander Involvement and Support: Complies: The commander, Major Derek Williamson, is actively involved in his unit’s safety and health program. He has issued a commander’s policy on safety and developed unit mishap notification procedures. His priorities and expectations for safety are stated clearly. Maj Williamson frequently conducts meetings in which the Unit Safety Representatives brief current safety items such as unit mishaps and open discrepancies. B. Unit Safety…
examples of his behavior. As a general manager of the Filtration Unit of Applied Research Technologies (ART), Peter Vyas notices that his teamwork had worked hard diligently to get his project on the right track successfully. The goal of his plan is to reconstruct a mini water-oxidation product. In spite of having two failures to reach the outcomes of this plan over past three years, his team still has good potential to make their goal happens. He never loses his strong interest and enthusiasm,…
1. Get in touch with your attorney to review your lease. I suspect that the property owner knows the a/c unit is about to expire and the property owner is planning to stiff you with the bill of a new unit. The property owner stated if you do not change the filters, you are responsible for replacing the unit. I questioned why the a/c was being inspected now and not when you originally signed the lease. No answer was given. When you were speaking about the summer heat it sound like a motor…
Through the last Month all three Peer Transition/ Diversion specialists have attended the five day Recovery Coach certification training and completed this successfully on 5/11, 5/12, 5/18, and 5/19. The Medical clearance for the three Peer Transition/ Diversion specialists has been completed for Catskill regional, but still waiting for the Justice center clearance to finally be a part of the Behavioral Health Unit. During this past month the three Peer Transition/ Diversion specialist has…
Making Meaning correlation tool indicates that these standards are touched upon in Unit 7, one day in Unit 4, one day in Unit 5, and the bulk of the remainder falling into Unit 9: Synthesizing. Week 3, Day 4 has students integrating information from three texts on the same topic to speak knowledgeably about the topic, with the majority of the rest of the unit helping students to form opinions and support their opinions with text evidence. After reading the Unit overviews, there appears to be…
Subject was received into the California Department of Corrections and Rehabilitations (CDCR) on February 16, 2000 for burglary in the 1st as a third striker. Subject arrived at CCI on July 7, 2015. Subject will be housed in Administrative Segregation Unit (ASU) placement in Facility A Housing Unit 6 cell B 106L, for self-expressed safety concerns. Subject explained that he was assigned as a porter in Facility A Housing Unit 3, and that Officer Lopez caught him with a kite/note that he was…