The reason I chose this score is because I did read your thoughtful insight on your topic of "Excess/Debauchery". I can understand why you chose this quote to display your topic, because it shows Meyer Wolfsheim being insensitive which connects to your topic. Also, you did correctly punctuate your quote. With that being said, I do believe this quote would work better with the topic of "The American Dream". I could be wrong about this since it's just my opinion. I say this because this quote shows the corruption of the American Dream. The American Dream is the idea that every U.S. citizen has an equal opportunity to achieve success and prosperity through their hard work and determination. In your post, you mention that the quote "shows no hard
