that, "'research' does not mean compiling facts and transmitting them to a teacher, but instead it is using a variety of conflicting sources to make an original argument on the subject that one is researching." In other words, when writing a research paper, it is important to enter into the conversation and share how the information that you found while researching effects your personal view on the subject. Furthermore, it is important to note that all the information that you find on the…
The way I would rewrite a technical paper is making it interesting, accessible and easy to understand for the average reader and give them a reason to read it. Also, I would maintain the paper's purpose of informing by maintaining the scientific aspect information also not overwhelm the audience with data. A technical piece is a bit dry for the average reader, some readers simply read the first paragraph and decide that it's not worth reading because it is uninteresting or they do not see the…
me. I initially chose one of the suggested topics provided for me in the instructions for my paper. There were a plethora…
semester I wanted to gain more writing experience without what was already a strong point of mine in order to sharpen my other skills. So, in Writing Project 3 I almost dropped them completely as a way to prove to myself that I could have a strong paper without them. Finally in Writing Project Four I believe I was able to disclude them…
It is already the fourth week of winter term and I started to feel the pressure from this term. At this moment, we are working on our next essay that is Essay 2. I know that it is totally different from the last essay assignment that we did because in the last assignment, we only have one working draft. For the next assignment, we have to do 2 working drafts before we submit the final draft and we also have to write a lot more than essay 1. For this assignment, it is a 5 weeks assignment and I…
Paper Plate Fractions: The Counting Connection by Ann McCoy, Joan Barnett, and Tammy Stine was an article that I had enjoyed reading. There were a variety of important ideas that I had learned from reading this article. To me, I believed that the most important idea was an activity that was designed to help third graders organize their thinking about rational number notation by connecting to a well-established, whole number routines. Other important ideas about the content that I have learned…
say that this paper can be great once you develop your arguments more. In terms of the introduction, I like the quote you included. It really gives the reader a perspective on what you are trying to say. An issue is that some of your sentences are too long and that will most likely detract the viewers’ attention from any points you are trying to make. I recommend making your sentences clearer and less lengthy, because the introduction is what gets the reader interested in your paper. The paper’s…
to my future career in the medical field, but knowing how to compose a well written paper is mandatory for preparing for a successful career. While in composition I our class was challenged be being faced with broad topics and fast assignments that forced you to think critically in order to meet deadlines. Out of all the essays assigned my…
Faculty member Christopher Migliaccio Course ___IDH1001____ Visit date & time: October 13th at 8:45 am Q1. I will like to discuss your annotations on my IDH and me paper. Also, are there any observations you have about my progress up to know and some strategies to improve my writing? A1. My professor checked his comments on my paper and highlighted the fact that sometimes I described the assignments instead of explaining why it was important and there were some minor grammar issues. However,…
overwhelming and hard to complete by myself. Luckily, the individual meetings and emails with my professor made everything much more clear and inviting. These final project meetings were very helpful in terms of receiving constructive criticism and then going back home to make changes to the paper. I’ve always had trouble writing multiple different rough drafts for one final assignment but the separate due dates and many comments from my professor made everything less stressful. By taking in all…