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Introduction: The U.S constitution’s Article 1, Section 8, Clause 8, “congress has the proper power to pomote the progress of science and useful arts, by protecting for the limited times to authors and developers the exclusive right to their respective writing’s and discoveries.” First Copyright Act 1790: The first copyright Act was passed in 1790 in US that contained most of the principles in English Law. When in 1790 the copyright was enacted, it protected published maps, charts and books…

a necessary tool in certain situations. Williams urges that little nominalization equals minimal passive voice without avoidance. Williams summarizes that revisions are necessary for both actions and characters. He explains that revisions for actions goes through a “three-step process” consisting of analyzation, assessment, and revisions. Williams converts characters into subjects by knowing when his subject is not in character form; where to search for his character, and…

date. There are many reasons for this. One reason is at the time America consisted of only 13 states. Now it has 50 states. Another reason is it has already been changed 27 times. The third and final reason is because they still have to make more revisions to the Constitution. That is why the Constitution is out of date and it needs to be revised and made…

Over the course of this semester in my English 1320 class I have seen a drastic change throughout my writing style. Although I still have difficulties with a few writing tasks, I believe that I have improved significantly throughout this course. I have found that with my professor’s guidance along with my own personal editing that my grades have increased. Although it is difficult to not get caught up in simply striving for a letter grade or attaining a 4.0 grade point average, I would like to…

Motivational Strategies to Design Instruction to evaluate the cosmetology course based upon the major motivational conditions. It will discuss the four major motivational conditions highlighted in Table 8.4 – inclusion, attitude, meaning, and competence. A revision of the cosmetology course will be included in the paper that will include the four major motivational conditions. Inclusion Students should be made part of the course from the very being; thus, the students will feel a sense of…

If I were to go back and revise my paper I would try to add to my analysis in the third and fourth paragraphs. I would also consider doing some reorganization within those two paragraphs. I would also take more time to go back and look at my punctuation. I would also seek out someone to read over my essay and give me feedback or suggestions for corrects I might have missed. When I revise my writing I dedicate most of my time to looking at sentence structure and seeing if it makes sense. This…

To whom my future classmates may be, what exactly is college writing? I personally think that college writing is similar to high school writing, but more. To emphasize, I think that college writing requires more time, research, revisions, and effort. Whereas high school may be more lenient when it comes to grading, college may not; I feel as if professors may be more strict when it comes to the outline and structure of one’s writing. To be a writer in college, is to do as the professor says and…

Fixing the Underrepresentation by Vickie Hale: Paragraph Revision Original paragraph Although there are those who disagree with women being underrepresented, some would say men are being assumed to be the most prevalent in the STEM fields, however, there may not be as big a gap as would be claimed. Some would say men are experiencing all the same negative entities that keep women from the STEM fields. With that being said the government should offer more incentives to women to help them pursue…

is in my portfolio, how I used a variety of strategies to improve my writing, how I interpreted the differences between revision and editing and, how I worked through different stages of the writing process. The contents that are in my portfolio consists of: an original draft of my piece of writing, evidence of self-assessment, evidence of peer-assessment, evidence of revision notes, evidence of editing, and a self reflection. My original piece of writing was about 3 pages.I originally thought…

The Medical College Admission Test (MCAT) is the standardized test required for entrance in to medical school all applicants in allopathic (M.D.), osteopathic (D.O.), and podiatric must take the MCAT. It is also accepted as an option for some veterinary and allied health school entrance. The MCAT tests the mastery of basic biology, chemistry, and physics concepts, problem solving requiring the integration of these disciplines, critical thinking, and writing skills in the medical field. The use…