Revision

Nancy Sommers sets forth a criteria in her essay “Revision strategies of Student Writers and Experienced Adult Writers” which all writers are classified into two types of writers, student writers and experienced writers. She gives each a set of characteristics used to classify writers. She explains that student writers always feel the need for constant revision and when they revise they mostly use methods such as deletion, substitution, addition and reordering. Conversely, experienced writers…

The LRA is an example of my best work because it demonstrates mastery to specific standards. For instance, the literary response log demonstrates proficiency in the second reading standard. The second reading standard is the ability to determine a theme of a text and its impact and connection to other parts of the story. It is demonstrated by the LRA because in the LRA for “Bums in the Attic”, states, “ The idea of having ‘bums’ in her attic that Esperanza is humble and kind. It shows that…

and institution goals will be evaluated to ensure that curriculum schedules are comprehensive and relevant. Lastly, the stage will focus on most effective technology to be applied in learning. 2nd year Revision The information collected in the first phase will form a core component in revision. As such, the schools targets will be aligned with the district board expectation and teachers’ performance reports. This will ensure that targets are within the appropriate range. Additionally, data…

someone else's paper. Straub writes on how the reader should tackle a proper revision by suggesting where to put comments, how much feedback to include, what tone should you use when providing feedback, and how to format your comments. Straub supports these focus points by using hypothetical situations and a real example of a student paper. Straub constantly provides more information on how the reader can enhance the revision process and thus allow for the reader to become a better writer.…

behaviors of animals. Overall, I felt as if the lesson had great potential, but I thought there were specific areas where revision was needed in order to better address the standards, learning theory and student goals. With the help of these various revisions, I was able to take a FOSS lesson and turn it into something more suitable for my future classes. As a general revision throughout the lesson, I modified how to address student behaviors when observing the fish. Instead of telling…

with this situation when her grades dropped because she neglected her homework and the revisions? The students spend too much of their time by posting some random videos or pictures or scrolling people’s pages. Therefore, this is a big and main distraction for the students, and soon they will lose their focus on studies or when learning in class. Consequently, they will not do any homework or do some revisions at home; thus, the students are not successful in school. I recently read an article…

the Kosovar Albanians of Siberia by the authoritative regime of Slobodan Milosevic. The moral justification of this conflict has since been contested with the validity debated by a variety of theoretical schools of thought. This essay will use the revisions to the Legalist Paradigm presented by Walzer in conjunction with the conditions of jus ad bellum to prove the moral impermissibility of NATOs intervention in Kosovo. To assess the moral justification of the intervention,…

strengths and weaknesses in my writing. Writing this cover letter is giving me the opportunity to reflect on my writing and review how my writing has improved throughout the semester. In this portfolio, I have included Writing Project One and Deep Revision. These are the very first and last essays I wrote and I picked these two to show how my writing has changed over the semester. Over the semester, I have learned things like how to fix my paragraph structure, introduce my sources into my…

Contracted Nose Revision rhinoplasty, commonly termed to as a secondary rhinoplasty procedure, refers to resize or reshape an individual’s nose following his/her prior attempted nose surgery. Contracted nose rhinoplasty is often performed to fix cosmetic irregularities along with correcting breathing difficulties, which may develop from suboptimal surgical procedure. Overview Revision rhinoplasty is considered as one of the most difficult nose correction surgeries performed by the top…

Survey Revisions Agreed Revisions The first revision we agreed with was the wording of our title. The wording would have been confusing and not at a fifth grade level. The second revision we agreed with was some wording in a few of the questions. For example, one of the questions said, “I feel the school administration doesn’t know bullying exists.” The suggestion was to use “isn’t aware that bullying exists.” We thought this was wording that was more understandable for students. There were…