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Draft 2 Revision Plan My professor and my writing tutor commented that my conclusion is essentially a restatement of what I have already said in my literature review. It is important for a conclusion to contribute to the literature review in some way, so for my next draft, I plan to review the articles and extend my conclusion to include some other observation or where the field could be going. One observation I might include is that although the articles focus on time periods separated by…

Why It's So Hard to Catch Your Own Typos” are all strategies for correcting the spelling of words whereas Sandra Giles' article “Reflective Writing and the Revision Process” focuses on the development of reflective writing skills to improve the revision process. Giles describes the various activities and assignments that she has had to complete as a student, what has helped her reflect on her own writing process, and how she has incorporated what she has…

enlarge their breasts with breast implants (breast augmentation/augmentation mammoplasty) and are displeased with their results, may want to consider a breast augmentation revision surgery with award-winning, Miami board certified plastic and reconstructive surgeon, Dr. Sam Gershenbaum. The procedure for an augmentation revision surgery is comparable to the procedure followed during an initial breast augmentation; Whenever possible, Dr. Gershenbaum places his incisions at the same location used…

1. Evaluation and Revision Phase a. Self-Evaluation In this phase, the writer evaluated the developed product. Some inappropriate words found in developed product. Additionally, some mistakes in grammar were also found. The writer commonly made mistake in the use of to be past in present adverbs. The examples of corrections toward prototype 1 are described in Table 5 below. b. Expert Review In this phase, the developed product was evaluated by two experts who had different expertise namely…

original text presented regarding the Arizona Constitution and the relevant provision which states simply that “the people have the power to propose laws and amendments to the constitution through the process of initiative and referendum,” the main revisions which offer stark contrasts to the original version as presented by Justice Ginsburg are the omissions of the “coordinate nature” language regarding the electorate of Arizona and the placement of the practice of initiative under the article…

mind. I would make four major revisions in our educational system. First, I would increase the requirements to become a licensed instructor in our schools. Second, providing regular tests that would calculate individual progress in students. Third, change the required classes for a high school diploma. Finally, high school graduates are not required to complete General Education courses if they are not required by their major. The center of attention in the revisions I would apply into our…

revising the translation have to depend on the type of revision that the target text requires. The type of revision will depend on the needs that the target text requires and the specifications of the translation brief (ibid.). In this, Parra Galiano (2007, 209) distinguishes four types of revisers: 1) A subject matter reviser for content revision: this person has an expert knowledge of the topic in the…

National dietary guidelines have been promulgated by various government agencies since the late 1800’s. The mandate followed and goals addressed in both the development and revision of recommendations have varied as a function of government protocol and the current state of population health. The original intention of the guidelines was to prevent dietary deficiency1,2; however, the focus of the recommendations has shifted towards disease reduction in response to developed westernized societies…

show how metaphors can change our actions and the way we think, but also the different metaphors that people have for the same task. Throughout this paper, Tomlinson gives an incite on the metaphors for revision in the minds of many great…

Revision of bilateral total hip replacement for failed hip arthroplasty after ten years; A case report Abstract Key words: Total hip arthroplasty(THA), Extended trochanteric osteotomy(ETO), Revision arthroplasty, Osteolysis, Introduction Total hip arthroplasty (THA) is one of the most advanced and common surgical techniques performed in the 20th century of health care system [1-3]. In recent years many patients have been undergoing total hip arthroplasty with a greater success rate of movement…