Revision

right-winged nationalist circles , Gustav Stresemann achieved to bring to a significant progress towards the revision of the articles of the Treaty of Versailles . Having achieved this he took a first step towards a restoration of an economically strong Germany . Through the policy of Fulfilment Stresemann was able to achieve international recognition for his efforts to have a peaceful revision of the terms, hence that the closer diplomatic relations with the Anglo-Americans was benefitting…

Actions Joseph M Williams and Joseph Bizup authors of Style Lessons in Clarity and Grace, 2014. Lesson 3 Actions, the author, illustrates the importance of being able to identify the character in the subject and their actions in the verbs, without the overuse of nominalizations. We express judgments of writing by utilizing words such as clear, direct, concise, or focused praise writing, or words like unclear, indirect or complex that often abuse writing. Telling Stories about…

I] Madrid Agreement A] Background: There was a need felt to establish a system which would link the international registrations of trademarks. The international registration draft which was prepared in the Paris revision conference of Rome in 1886 was placed before the next round which was scheduled at Madrid. The international Trademark Draft which was placed at the Madrid Conference in 1890 was signed and adopted by nine countries in 1891. The following were the highlights: - • Original draft…

the story over and over to really grasp the motives and feelings of the man and the girl. This, along with some research on the symbolism in the story helped me to understand the points that Hemingway was trying to get across to his readers. My revision process was extensive the following details will provide you with an insight of the steps taken to make this…

Internal Classification of Diseases, Tenth Revision is the standard diagnostic tool for epidemiology, health management and clinical purposes. By using the ICD-10 classification system, this can be used to monitor any current diseases that affects the world by determining specific targets to countries or populations (WHO). ICD-10 is different from its predecessor by adding alphanumeric categories to expand classification options. One of the main revisions to the coding which provides more detail…

Kim is an extremely hard and productive worker. During the course of her daily duties, she is always working on some type of project and has little downtime. One major project that Kim has been very passionate about this year was a purge on old firearms. Kim has invested a tremendous amount of work organizing, categorizing, researching, and documenting firearms that are in need of destruction. Outside of these extracurricular projects Kim is meticulously detail orientated. She ensures that even…

There were also multiple revisions needed for my rhetorical analysis. Similar to my playlist profile, I had issues with grammar and proper MLA format, so I focused in on those micro revisions. However, I dealt with some more major problems within my paper as well. You commented that in my introduction I did not have a forecasting statement, so that was added to the paper. For the section that was titled tone, style, and emotional appeal, you made the comment that I did not discuss the actual…

Princeton University’s protest on the Woodrow Wilson building and many other buildings as they may reflect the views of the University. Malcolm Gladwell’s revision of the church and the university positively portrays how the minorities of the community are misunderstood and overlooked within their own communities. Gladwell accurately portrays the revision of the community through the binaries of the two communities, and also the patterns that the two communties share. To be willing to make…

though writers have been making revision on classic fairy tales or producing retellings over the years, the most well-known and most read fairy tales are still the classic ones. When writers are writing, their beliefs and thoughts are inevitably influenced by the society and time period they live in. Since the society has definitely changed compared to 18th or 19th century, are the fairy tales that were written decades ago still appropriate for people to read? And if revision is needed for…

the term “well regulated” mean and both sides would respond that there is no correct basis. It’s apparent there needs to be a definite revision to the law. This leads to the next point, what kind of revision will apply to every situation, event, location, etc? However when it’s presented to the voting citizen, what is the “how” they will explain the reason the revision should be voted in. One could what’s there warrant and statistics to back (Hard to understand these two sentences). Either way,…