Revision

Essentially everything that the public saw as dangerous and ridiculous (Johansen 127).Clearly, Aristophanes’ revision was most successful as the public accepted it as their only opinion of who Socrates was. However, time seemed to play an important role in Socrates’ trials as the play was ultimately used as a reason to blame him for all of the wickedness after the…

My literacy narrative I turned in last week was not a complicated paper, but I had a few troubles along the way. I had just one main problem and it was the introduction. My comma mistakes and trying to include enough support in my conclusion was not a breeze to do either. Overall, the essay was not hard to write about it was just a few little mistakes that I had along the way that made it complicated. My main problem was my introduction paragraph. Writing on my developmental English class was a…

comments thoroughly and rate the comments from 1-5 stars. After evaluating the comments, I would choose comments that are not repetitive and helpful and include it in my revision plan. Next, I would form a short summary that consists of 3 sentences about my plan to revise the essay. During my revisions, I would use the revision plan as a reference and would specifically go back to the essay and edit that particular portion. This way, the readers would notice a change from my second draft as they…

Recommendation: ( ) Publish without change (please give reasons in report). ( ) Publish after authors have considered the optional revisions mentioned in the report. ( ) Publish after authors have made the revisions mentioned in the report. (I do not need to see the manuscript again.) (X) Revisions are necessary. Return to me on resubmittal. ( ) Revisions are necessary. On resubmittal, send to: (Use as much space as needed to list names of alternative reviewers.) …

My revision of “Face it, America!” that follows this cover letter reflects what I have learned in English 1021 so far. While revising this essay, I learned when to use present tense in my writing and past tense in my writing when appropriate. In this class, I have learned to use more transitions and appropriate transitions in my writing. My revision reflects this because in my second paragraph where I mention the significance of police officers, I use transition words for every new sentence that…

by myself. This total independence forced me to quickly learn how to use my own skills for revision and rely less on outside guidance. Moreover, when no one was available to critique my essay I had to make sure I assembled gratifying amendments. If I did not cultivate my ability to revise, I would have risked underwhelming progress and poor content reforms. Fortunately, I did endeavor to expand my revision skills. My teacher and class website provided many tools and packets that I used myself to…

The revisions would be done by my peers, SI leader, and Dr. Moreno which was really helpful because they would help me improve my weaknesses. Furthermore, those weaknesses were I had many awkward sentences, not using academic vocabulary, and not adding much detail…

The book “Our Lady of Controversy” edited by Alicia Gaspar de Alba and Alma Lopez addresses many prevalent issues that were raised when Queer Chicana artist Alma Lopez showcased her reinterpretation of the iconic archetype of La Virgen de Guadalupe at the museum of International Folk Art in 2001 CyberArte. The book consist of short essays from scholars that analyzed the controversy through the context of religion, feminism, art and censorship, colonialism, queer theory, and Chicanx history.…

not believing them is made impossible. A quote from Orwell that perfectly explains the danger of the revision of history comes from O’brien in the novel when Winston is a prisoner in the ministry of love, “He who controls the past controls the future. He who controls the present controls the past.” The party is in the process of complete control over the past through the process of the revision of history. This is dangerous because not only could they erase past from long ago, but they can begin…

The flaws in the constitution are not limited to intentional ambiguity and vagueness, for major issue can be found in chapter four, which despite not being included within the section marked specifically for listing the rights of Thai people, clearly limits the freedoms of the Thai people and must be addressed. Chapter four is entitled “Duties of the Thai People,” and delineates the relationship between the Thai people and the executive government. The first of these “duties” is listed under…