Revision

Expert writers value writing several drafts, developing their ideas, their audience, sentence structure, and accept that their writing is ever changing. Writing is not a linear process of pre-reading, writing, and revision. But rather writing as an expert is a constant loop of revision, writing, and preparing. I have begun to adapt this philosophy, not only in my English course but in all my…

The federalism and state powers are often complicated. The powers of the national government are specifically granted in Article I, Section 8, of the U.S Constitution. This includes commerce, borrow money, and declare war. In addition, federalism has implied powers which can affect local governments. As a members of the federal Union, Texas has constitutional guarantees, which is rights and protections under the Constitution, and limitations imposed by Article I, Section 10. Two provisions which…

By using different craft lesson each week, I get to experience different ways in revision my paper to see that there was more way to revision then just one ways. Discussion board has show me how to step out of my comfort zone, in bettering my writing by giving feedback to peer as they gave feedback to me. At the end of each week I write in my journal to keep track…

The Nuremberg code is the most important documents about research ethics principles for human experiment which is formulated in August 1947 after the Nuremberg Trials which held at the end of the Second World War. It was established to have a standard to judge the Nazi scientist and physicians who had conducted the inhuman human experiments in the concentration camps during the war. Informed consent was established as a result of these principles. According to this code, voluntary consent free…

themselves. The intersectionality, in certain situations, of gender, sex, race, ethnicity, sexual orientation, class, and age complicates this matter by shaping each person by their unique experiences. This exam will explore the overall theme of revision and critique in feminism and the effect of socio-economic class on the vision of women in past and present. 1. At many different points…

This said, the first thing you should know about self-review is that it is a two-step process: revision followed by proofreading. Yes, they are different and yes, the order should not be switched. Revision is the process by which an author edits for content. For example, my essay topic is “How can the toxic pesticides used on the orange crop in the US be replaced for more environmentally friendly…

Once I found my topic it became easier, and went straight into work. I asked the people closest to me their personal experiences on coming to the United States. I was really proud of the way I told the personal stories. I tried my best to portray their personalities and experiences into my paper. My goal for my audience was to create an understanding towards immigrants. In my Writing 104 class for this semester our first topic was a literacy memoir. I decided to write about a previous paper I…

Penalty: Efficiency versus civil rights Progressively, in the path of social evolution, states and individuals reach unanimity that some practices are intolerable. Ceremonial human sacrifice, slavery, corporeal torture, and the death penalty are some of these practices (Yorke, 2005). Many countries have abolished the practice of death penalty. Nevertheless, it should be noted that internationally unanimity against this act is yet to be reached. For instance, the Republic of China puts to death…

define. In my revision of the piece, I made sure to make it clearer what I was trying to say within my thesis. By “live like weasels”, I meant to live wild and free, with little care of consequence. My paragraph structure and transitions were far weaker than I had thought. Upon reading my instructor’s comments and feedback, I realized that my paragraphs stopped and started awkwardly and frequently, and I did not connect them in a fluid manner. I chose to remedy this in my revision, and I…

1. Re-read your selected article and take careful notes, using analysis techniques described in Module Two as guidance. For a review of these techniques, please click here. Then, revisit your original interpretation of the author's goal and re-state the claim to be addressed in your analysis essay. Has the author's goal changed with this analytical reading of the text? If so, how? If not, why not? In a literal analysis of the article, Tan states in her subtitle that "Mother Tongue" is about…