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Reflection: This semester we worked on several writing assignments that helped to build my writing proficiency. Applying MLA formatting was what I performed better in as I received the highest overall rating for that through my essay feedback. I need to improve my grammar and punctuation, I lost a significant amount of points because of it. I 've always struggled with grammar, as I write the same way that I think. I often have long thoughts that then translate into run-on sentences. I did a very…

my paragraphs by not talking so much how I will imply it into my life and actually talking more about the problems Steve Jobs faced. Giovanie Vallejo – Giovanie feels like my essay focuses more on myself than my role model. He suggested that I revise and edit my essay to focus more on the obstacles he faced and the methods used to overcome them, and my plan to overcome those obstacles if I face them. Lastly, he re-stated that I should shorten my essay so it can be effective. The strategy…

It feels like so long ago when I first began this English course. I can remember being so excited about the class topic, racism and social justice, which I felt that I had a lot of passion for. Little did I know that I would have to gather up even more enthusiasm and passion to be able to continue writing papers about the same topic all semester long. This course has tested my endurance, and at many times my patience, and for that I am thankful because I know in the end, it has made me a better…

causes me additional stress. To avoid this, I tend to revise my paper throughout the writing process to eliminate a long revision process at the end of the composition. By using this method, I tend to revise as I see fit throughout the text then revise one last time for grammar, fluency, and spelling at the end. This can be my downfall that I hope to work on in the future. Through the opportunities that Professor Tucker has given us to revise my assignments, as well as my Reflection Paper of…

career I have developed a very solid process. No matter what I am writing it always follows the same pattern: outline, draft, revise. It may vary in some details, but tends to stick to this simple pattern. Having such a strict process makes creative writing nearly impossible for me. That sort of writing calls for a more flexible process order, It may go more like draft, revise, outline or other variations. I am unable to alter my process that much without losing my mind. The details of this…

Introduction Greece is located in Europe, and is mostly surrounded by water. The people of Greece believed in many Gods and Goddesses. The Greeks were polytheistic. Over time, different forms of governments came in and went out. Kings had complete political power. Political Power was controlled by small groups of wealthy people. Tyrants were cruel and unfair to the people they ruled. Democracy gave power to the people. Monarchy Kings had complete political power. “The people of these…

one of the crucial steps. In section C1 of the book, the topic discussed is how to accordingly plan writing an essay. While in the section C2, it focuses on writing the first draft of your essay. Finally, the third section explains how to properly revise your first draft to make it as best as possible. Throughout these sections, Hacker and Sommers explain how to construct a successful piece of writing and help demonstrate the writing process. In this book, Hacker and Sommers first focus on the…

allow the bill to die or members to revise some of the content that could to lead to representatives altering their views on a particular piece of legislation several times. To make it even harder, before the bill reaches even this stage, it…

In this essay, I will discuss my belief that Susan Wolf would argue an individual is morally responsible for actions caused by implicit bias. Furthermore, I will address the difference between the conclusions drawn by Wolf with Robin Zheng’s. In Susan Wolf’s “Sanity and the Metaphysics of Responsibility”, Wolf proposed the sane deep-self view. She redefined the criteria for sanity by quoting M’Naughten Rule that “a person is sane if (1) he knows what he is doing and (2) he knows that what he is…

constitute his case for independence and to amalgamate americans to rebel adjacent Britain. “He has obstructed the administration of Justice…”, “He has abdicated the government here…” , “He has plundered our seas…”(Jefferson 13) and so on. Stanton revises this portion of Jeffersons Declaration, utilizing the same format, modernizing the document by incorporating societies issues. Stanton’s thirteen uses of “He” (Stanton 17) following Jeffersons…