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style. In Actions, he makes two important points: make the main characters the subject of a sentence and make the main action the verbs of a sentence (Williams, 44). Writers create clearer and more understandable prose for their readers when they revise a "revision" and turn a nominalization back into a verb. He identifies common problems, offers helpful tips, and includes nine do-it-yourself exercises that illustrate his concepts (33-44). Making the main character the subject, and letting…

Unfortunately, I was unable to really obtain a grade I thought I would have achieved, because my carelessness to revise was shown when you noticed plagiarism in my paper. This was followed by a firm talking to where you made sure that I knew the consequences of this action, but throughout the talk I could hear the sympathy in your voice. Along with this and you still allowing me to revise my paper made my respect for you grow. Although the plagiarism was in my paper, I still received positive…

the rough drafts I could see what areas of my essays were good and the areas I struggled and that helped me more and more throughout the semester. I also learned that I am even more of a perfectionist than I first believed, I would go through and revise numerous times never…

Juan Correa Ruiz ENG 102 Stephanie Phillips 10th May 2017 Final Portfolio Reflective Essay As a student of ENG 102, I had the opportunity to work and improve a lot of skills that would make me be a better student. Having English as my second language, I have faced many challenges to become a fluent speaker. After that, I realize that speaking is totally different from writing the same language. Ever since I learned how to speak English, writing an essay has been always a struggle. I always…

Through this final assignment, I was able to revise two of my past writings in this course. At the time to when these were due, I considered them to be “A papers” and “well-written.” However, after the time that has passed in this course, I’ve discovered the endless amounts of errors within my writing. To now having more of a keen, unbiased perspective with mine and other peers’ sentence syntaxes, I’ve acknowledged the flaws in my writing to now repairing them with slight improvements. With the…

If I were to go back and revise my paper I would try to add to my analysis in the third and fourth paragraphs. I would also consider doing some reorganization within those two paragraphs. I would also take more time to go back and look at my punctuation. I would also seek out someone to read over my essay and give me feedback or suggestions for corrects I might have missed. When I revise my writing I dedicate most of my time to looking at sentence structure and seeing if it makes sense. This…

thoroughly and rate the comments from 1-5 stars. After evaluating the comments, I would choose comments that are not repetitive and helpful and include it in my revision plan. Next, I would form a short summary that consists of 3 sentences about my plan to revise the essay. During my revisions, I would use the revision plan as a reference and would specifically go back to the essay and edit that particular portion. This way, the readers would notice a change from my second draft as they…

Audience Benefits and the “You” View (Obj. 4) Your Task. Revise the following sentences to emphasize the perspective of the audience and the “you” view. 16. We have prepared the enclosed form that may be used by victims to report identity theft to creditors. If you are a victim of identity theft, a form has been enclosed to help you report it to creditors. 17. To help us process your order with our new database software, we need you to go to our website and fill out the customer information…

Hello, My reason for substituting this course is due to the fact that I have already learned the knowledge and concepts from a course taken from a previous school (ENGL 102 from the Community College of Philadelphia) which satisfy the course objectives for ENGL 202C. With this course, I learned the techniques I need to write an effective technical paper. During this course, I wrote multiple papers which dealt with various aspects of our world today, such as science and technology, social…

Qingling (Ashley Cheng) Lecturer Suzanne FTVMS110 16 May 2016 ‘Advertising’, writes Rosalind Gill, ‘simultaneously uses, incorporates, revises, attacks and depoliticizes feminist themes and ideas’ (2007, 94). How does Special K’s ‘Own It’ advertisement engage with such themes and ideas? The Kellogg’s ad attacks feminist ideas by using self-consciousness of women to sell their product, and uses feminist ideas by telling the audience ‘Lets be perfectly imperfect.’ (YouTube. “Special K Own It…