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Should papers be graded by a computer? this is a controversial subject as more computer AI (artificial intelligence) programs try to replicate the human brain's intelligence to a fine point, or at least in a specific field anyways. Some papers are already graded this way whether it be a multiple choice test or a short response test in some cases. there are a few problems that a computer could have with grading lengthy essays however. The main reason many people agree with, is the absence of…

The Texas insurrection began long before those first shots in the town of Gonzales on October 2, 1835. While this small skirmish is considered the first battle of Texas’ War of Independence the roots and tensions behind it were deep seeded. Of the multiplicity of factors the led to the revolution it is important to look closely at not only the vast cultural differences between the settlers and their Mexican counterparts, but also at their political differences, the physical location of Texas,…

Rating Performance Qualifications Should be Electronic Only The Coast Guard needs to revise the way non-resident training for advancement is administered. Moving to an electronic only version of the Enlisted Rating Advancement Training System (ERATS) would provide a more efficient way for Rating Performance Qualifications (RPQs) to be completed, administered, and tracked. The current system is cumbersome and allows too much room for misinformation to make it out to the field. A benefit of…

Constitution replaced the Articles of Confederation because it was not strong enough to govern the people of the United States Of America properly. The Constitution and the Articles of Confederation are alike because the Constitution was made to revise the Articles of Confederation during the Philadelphia Convention. The Articles of Confederation was written in 1781 but it lasted only 16 months, which proved to have many flaws. The Articles of Confederation did not explain the rights that the…

When an individual attempt to achieve self-satisfaction and eager for freedom, despite there would be a sense of loneliness, it often results in frantic guiltiness due to the self-absorbed ambition. The short story, the Painted Door by Sinclair Ross is about the fluctuating emotions of a farmer’s wife, Ann, while her husband was away from home during a double wheel blizzard. In the story, Ann has significantly reveals that she cannot deal with the restricting life as a wife of an unambitious and…

law, and the basic norms of a free and decent society. He pledges to deport over 11 million undocumented immigrants, to ban Muslims from entering the United States, to surveil American Muslims and their houses of worship, to torture again, and to revise libel laws. Trump’s proposals taken together would violate the…

at a Constitutional Government was in April of 1776, called by the Georgia trustees in response to series of mass meetings. All of the states constitutions were drafted by the Constitution Convention which was held in Philadelphia, Pennsylvania to revise the league of states and the first system under the Articles of Confederation. Georgia’s Constitution consists firstly of a preamble which described the principles that the Constitution is meant to serve, as well as each article this document…

Aunt Alexandra, Miss Gates, and Jem Finch revealed through their actions, beliefs, and thoughts the tragedies and horrors associated with racism and prejudice. Aunt Alexandra reveals the tragedies and horrors associated with racism and prejudice positively and negatively. When Aunt Alexandra first found out Atticus was defending Tom Robinson, she was not pleased with him. She believed that by defending a black man, Atticus would ruin the family. Defending a black man would ruin not only the name…

A significant number of medical errors rises in a process of patient handoff and results in less than optimal care, patient harm, and even death. Pesanka et al. (2009) described an initiative which focuses on standardization of the physical and informational handoff called “Ticket to Ride” during hospital transport ticket to ride included pretransport assessment of patient and transportation checklist by sending unit, transporter, receiving unit, patient participation and message of safe patient…

requirement. Since I was so worried about this, I completely forgot to talk about how having a college degree will help in receiving a steady income. If I had this my paper would have had a much stronger argument and it would have remained on topic. When I revise this essay I need to work on making my argument stronger by having a better ethos. I need to make sure I show my readers that I am credible by using strong evidence and covering my main points. In this essay I made the mistake of not…