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that I managed to get less than 400 words. I think my strengths of this paper are the process of selection. This is the part of the paper where I got to include my own personal experience and how does that affect how I view the book. If I were to revise process of selection I would add more points about how people in my community are affected by earning the minimum and their experience in the…

main ideas and supportive examples for the essay. After brainstorming, one will begin drafting the rough draft where they can write write down ideas or thoughts that immediately come to mind. Then after writing the rough draft, one will revise and rewrite it. To revise is to look back on the draft with a fresh mind, review what main points are stated, and reorganize the ideas into well structured sentences. Editing comes after revising. To edit an essay is to proofread it;it is to check for…

writing this final Letter of Reflection to discuss my background in reading and writing about literature, my strengths and weaknesses in writing, changes I have noticed in my writing style, process, and abilities this semester, and why I have chosen to revise my Initiation Story, poem research paper, and essay on Death of a Salesman for my final portfolio. While in high school, I took College Prep English courses as a freshman, sophomore, and junior. In those classes, I was required to read…

students waiting in front of your room which makes it impossible to meet you. I am extremely grateful to you for creating the journal in Ilearn as it helped me a lot to clarify my doubts and revise my drafts through your suggestions and guidelines. I am glad you made it mandatory to submit our work in Ilearn, revise it, and then turn it in, because I never would have given it a try if it were not a part of our…

Writing anything is hard. Before this class I never gave any real thought to my writing I did it because it was something I was told to do. Although writing can be a difficult process, this class helped me to better my writing be teaching me how to better manage my time, use technology, and to be more confident in my writing. Many students lack the skills it takes to manage time when it comes to homework assignments. What I learned is waiting till the last minute to write your papers isn 't…

other words, the main point of the article is congress neglecting to respond to President Obama’s request to address decisions made, revise and specify in a new doctrine the president’s role as opposed to congress in regards to war.…

of the thirteen states sent delegates to a conference in Annapolis, Maryland to contemplate ideas to better international trade. The six delegates agreed to meet up a year later in Philadelphia, Pennsylvania to “revise” the Articles of Confederation. In 1787, the delegates did not “revise” the Articles, but rather…

my writing were the weakest in this essay. I think if I thought about a better way to make my transitions into paragraphs my grade would have improved. When I revise my the papers I write i try to provide a ton of thought. I start with reading the essay over again and try my best to figure out what I could do better. The things I revise the most would be my word choice and try to use more imagerie. I also go to my friends or other people for their input in my writing to see what they have to…

When I was writing my paper I need to know what I’m doing for it so I chose the topic Hassan vs. Piggy because both of them are very similar but they are different in both books so I thought about some good main topic for Hassan and Piggy. When I was thinking about some main ideas about both characters and I thought that some topics don't make sense with both of them so I was stuck with brainstorming. Then when I started my rough draft I was having trouble on how to start my Introduction because…

When one idea isn’t the best, revise, and revise again. Write down everything as it may come in handy. One thing, writer and film director, Noah Baumbach would say to aspiring artists is to “draw inspiration from everyone and everything” (Renée). Stories that have a meaning with audience members…