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logos and pathos. And then next paragraph this where the author lose her credibility an audience in the article. Yes the topic sentences were clear and adequately introduce what each paragraph was going to address.one topic sentence that could be revise is “Another problem I have with this article…” it shows more…

Writing an essay has always been somewhat of a puzzle to me. I have only written four or five essays that required real thought and never did particularly well on any of them. To me, writing has been like a stream of consciousness from my mind to the page, not something to edit and perfect. The weaknesses of my writing out way the strengths, at least in my view. I have always been more of a reader, but I have had little practice with writing. Reading was once a huge part of my life. I couldn’t…

According to section 301.4 of SOX 2002, the public company audit committee is required to implement procedures for the receipt, retention, and treatment of complaints received by the whistleblowers concerning auditing matters, internal accounting controls, or accounting. Also, the complaints have to be treated confidentially by the audit committee by making whistleblowing procedures for the submission around dubitable accounting or auditing matters to be anonymous. To encourage this, the audit…

Chapter Eight: In this Chapter, Graff and Birkenstein discuss creating connections in writing. Connections keep writing from becoming confusing for readers. To keep this confusion from occurring, the authors suggest four ways to create connections in writing. The first of these is using transitional words or phrases to show the reader how the sentences connect. The second is using “pointing words”, such as this, that, or it, so the reader must refer to the previous sentence in order to…

first step to the writing process is pre-write, the step where ideas are formed. After the pre-write comes drafting when the ideas previously formed are written down to make the first copy. Once the first draft is written, the next steps are to revise and edit it. Then, after all the mistakes are corrected and the paper is completed, the last step is to publish it. Pre-write is the first step used to get an essay started. In the pre-write decisions are made such as the topic of the paper,…

The Making of the Constitution In the video, The Making of the Constitution, The History Channel breaks down the overly complicated steps it takes to make a government. Many Americans at the time are worried that the country will fail as a whole because they cannot seem to keep afloat after the aftermath of the American Revolution. Many are worried as problems keep arising, that the United States will not be able to combat them with a lack of governmental order and power. In this paper I will be…

On January 7, 2008, my grandmother was diagnosed with stage four lung cancer. Doctors gave her six months to live. I was living in Georgia at the time; however, I was determined to revise my schedule to allow me to drive back and forth to care for her. I would drive each Thursday to Louisiana, and return in just enough time to make it back to work on Monday morning. While in Louisiana, I was in charge of my grandmother’s personal needs…

discuss their findings with other scientists. Just as professional scientists present their work and ideas to others, students should do so as well. By giving students these opportunities, teachers are allowing students to bring in their ideas, test, revise, and/or add to them to match science concepts and…

Some of the basic information about the Minoans, who built the Knossos palace, is that they were the first civilization in Europe beginning in 3000BC; they flourish from 2200 to 1450 BC. The dates are approximate because “. . . historians continue to revise dates as they compare pottery styles, metalwork, Cretan writing, burial customs, and other factors”(Kruger). The Minoan name come from the legend of a Greek king named Minos. The wall inside the Knossos palace is filled with frescos and…

has been Monday for so long. Journey is still playing. Theme essays, Miss. Hintze calls from the front of the room. She says you can do it on whatever theme you want, but you know what she wants. Six paragraphs of death drip from your fingers. You revise. Five paragraphs of death remain. The last one has escaped, you know not where. You look around, and your classmates seem to all have the same predicament. Exactly one paragraph of death has escaped from all of you, and as you look for it, you…