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wrong and ignored me without explanation, whereas she was kind and helpful to others. I thought that was fine, but it occurred many times, so I did not want to talk in class. At the time I had the final exam with an unexpected result, I would like to revise the exam by her. However, she told me you were not my student anymore and refused me. Therefore, I felt down at that time, and I also did not want to study at this place anymore. In brief, this depressing story hurt me for a long time, but I…

“You Decide” Charter School Scenario Situation Analysis This proposal is for an evaluation of the current network at Leonard Cooper Charter School, as well as a list of recommendations to address concerns raised by system technicians and end-users. Leonard Cooper Charter has roughly 1,000 students and faculty, all needing a smooth connection to the school LAN. A new addition was added to the building a few years ago, and has resulted in numerous IT problems for the school. Overall,…

The Critical Legal Studies movement started in Madison, Wisconsin with a small group of friends who were not your usual left-leaning activist. They challenged the status quo. The group eventually grew into a movement which spread to many law schools and transcended into the ideology on many. The central theme to the Critical Legal Studies was the opposite of the average liberal lawyer. The belief was the law should be carefully interpreted and the rhetoric of the law should be taken very…

a detailed business plan or following business etiquettes. I will surely use these skills beyond the classroom. I really did grow as writer since my senior year in high school, I can see it in this semester and last semester. I went from having to revise six or seven mistakes on my first essay to only two mistakes on my other essays. Now my paper are not as summary-heavy as before, I know how to use ethos, pathos and logos in my writing, and I can synthesize an essay. These are things that I did…

when you lack of sleep. Your brain starts to dysfunction and makes you think your getting all your work done which in reality your zoned out or sleeping. This one time when it was finals week I had two exams I need to study by tomorrow, including a revise essay. In that time I haven’t slept well for two days straight and have only…

notebook that has become my constant companion. My writing process, as it turns out, isn’t only sitting down with a pencil or keyboard; it is also a thought process. I do much of the work in my head so that when the time comes to sit down and write, revise or edit the pages fill up quickly. Turning my procrastination…

Taking a Look Back “What exactly is your controlling purpose?” I got asked this question so many times by my peers, my instructor, and even the tutors at the writing center to the point where it got frustrating to try and explain. Then I realized, my controlling purposes for all three of my interpretive essays were vague and confusing for my audience to understand. Because of my controlling purposes being confusing, the rest of my paper subsequently wasn’t coherent for my audience. But, the…

No matter how many times I’ll have to write one, reflections are always difficult. They make you look at yourself and your work and dissect every good and bad aspect of it. Sometimes it’s hard because just the task of analyzing one’s own work can be tricky, but my personal biggest issue is learning how to fix what I find specifically wrong. Part of this is due to my own writing style, along with the bad habits that come with it. However, throughout this class, I have learned more about how to…

language, plus I was in classes full of English speakers. I remember I froze and I started to think "how am I gonna get through this." I remember trying to revise my papers over and over just to try to get myself on the same level as the people in my class. One day I was sitting in my freshman inquiry class, and the professor asked us students to revise each other's papers. I remember I just wanted to pretend that I forgot to do the assignment and act like I didn't know about it, but my paper…

Survey Questions: Adjectives Creative- For an example from APULL, I try to avoid essays based off of clichés or other people’s ideas, instead creating essays by thinking about what I got out of the book and the parts that I personally believed were deserving of deeper analysis. Outside of school and writing, I use my creativity in my extracurriculars; I am an excellent French Horn player and have achieved the rank of Honor Thespian for my commitment and contributions to the theatre program here…