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The Constitution is Outdated and Needs to be Revised Have you ever wondered if the Constitution is a little out of date and should be fixed? In this essay you will read that the Constitution is out of date and what should be fixed in it. The Constitution is a great document that has protected our rights for many years. Now there are so many things changing so fast that the Constitution seems to be forgotten about a lot. Most people wouldn’t know most of the things that the Constitution says in…

An arts organization should not request a police background check or a vulnerable sector verification until it has decided that the person is otherwise suitable for the position (whether paid or volunteer) and has made an offer of engagement, conditional on a satisfactory police check. The police background check should be limited to information that is relevant to suitability for the position or work in question. The information about the individual is subject to Canada’s privacy laws and the…

In my high school writing was a little different than others. While most were in normal 9th and 10th grade English, I was in Read 180 and Century 21, which both of these classes aim more towards making us better readers not writers. Before my junior year my school changed things up a bit and made juniors and seniors picked what kind of English class they were interested in. In read180 once a week we had to read an article from the newspaper or a quote the teacher posted on the board; for the…

Alex Christians and I interviewed Gerald Bosch, this process was illuminating because I have not had much experience working with a group. I felt that our communication and organization was essential to our success. As for the work load, Alex put in more than his fair share of effort. He created the initial timeline, worked on his half of the attorney interview, creating questions and asking his questions to Mr. Bosch. Alex also wrote his half of the essay, did most of the editing, as well as…

warranted, inadequate and insufficient. We interview client’s to make the shelter are providing outstanding services, receiving adequate service for their case manager/shelter, their needs are being meet and that they feel safe in their environment. We revise the operation plans and review applications for shelter certification. We facilitate inspections to analyze that the program requirements comply with the rights of the residents, staffing, food service, recreation, admission/discharge…

thesis statement, but it was kind of an afterthought. That sentence is: The process for adopting instructional materials like textbooks needs to be revised. I wanted to incorporate it into my thesis statement, but after your comments I may need to revise those three sentences altogether. It is very…

1) Why was the Convention called? a) By 1786, it was clear that the Articles of Confederation presented an ineffectual government for the union. With strong encouragement from six of the states, Congress called a convention to revise the Articles of Confederation into a more powerful document 2) Did it do what it was expected to do? a) The Constitution proved to be an effective and strong form of government. 3) Who were the major players at the Convention? a) George Washington, James Madison,…

Countries Research Essay Doc Type your essay in the box below. Do a spell check and correct spelling errors. Then paste it in PaperRater.com to edit and revise it before getting the final grade. Most people enjoy a change of scenery every once in awhile. It can become tedious being in the same routine every single day, in the exact same place. Seeing another country can spice up a person’s life and let them have an experience like no other. All tourists should visit Japan because of the…

me pave the way to a better future.” This is honestly the most description I gave of him, and this is my thesis! There is no vivid detail though that is what the prompt actually called for, this is not a clear and concise description. If I were to revise it I would add things like how he smelled, how he held me, something to really help the reader feel the…

a series of influences in America. It made racial discrimination against Asian people and this racism resulted in creating biased laws for white people. The interesting part is American people defined races by themselves so that they could make or revise Asian Exclusion Act as they please according to their own interpretation of race. In this way, they tried to keep Asian people from coming to America or take advantage of them as a measure of meeting their own interests. Thus, I think the…