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able to me as an incoming freshman, I have come to the conclusion that I would like to enroll in English 100. As I looked at the characteristics in the boxes in the “Guide to Choosing the Right First-Year Writing Course” for English 100 and English 100P, I find that I fulfill almost all of the characteristics for English 100. For the reasons stated throughout this essay, I believe this course would be best suited for me in my first year as a college freshman. English 100, which is offered…

of the characters. I made these revisions because I can better relate to that audience, in addition, I wanted to give more insight to the audience on the superheroes character, which is absent from the original work of Unit 3. Furthermore, I will revise Unit 1, providing more in depth explanations and I try to relate my arguments to my thesis, which was also absent in the original work of Unit…

punishment is a form of punishment where people is put to death as punishment for their crime. I do not think this will decrease the number of crime in anyway, but it does keep them always from society. The way I would solve this is to discontinue or revise the guideline of capital…

Probably the two biggest things I’ve learned from taking English 1010 is summarization and citation. At the beginning of the class, I struggled with not trying to make my summaries sound like lists. As I kept practicing, I learned how to reflect my writing style and voice into my summaries, while still being able to effectively get the point of the original source across. I learned how to add citations to my writing when quoting or paraphrasing a source, something of which I did very little…

Profession of Arms: Role of the Human Resources Sergeant To be a professional is to understand, embrace, and competently practice the expertise of the profession (The Profession of Arms, 2010). The Army White Paper, The Profession of Arms, further explains the definition of the profession of arms as a vocation comprised of experts certified in the ethical application of land combat power. “I am an expert, I am a professional” often recited by American Soldiers, in the Soldier’s Creed, are…

It was reported that females are paid less than males. The salaries of female workers are raised with a minimum percentage as compared to males. Duke said that female employees are kept away from the managerial positions to which they are capable. Another plaintiff stated that she was supervised by a male supervisor having less qualification that her. Those potential female candidates who did not get the managerial jobs despite of their qualification also share their views on media. They said…

Still, the rough draft doesn’t need to be perfect, so when constructing the final draft, you have to revise and proof read the original rough draft, more or less. For the discipline research project, the rough draft is in the complete wrong format and the ideas I was trying to portray were totally unorganized. As you can see, throughout the whole thing…

the springing new concepts that dramatically changed the reaction of Europe and the world would to issues spread across the globe. Variations in governmental policies, art and philosophy affected the European culture, prompting future cultures to revise their ideas and policies based on the Greeks and Romans. As time surpassed, the expansion of these empires invigorated cultural dispersal, assimilating the culture of the two empires in the land it had conquered. Ancient Greece passed on a new…

the problem and create a shared vision to solve it; specify the selected issues problems together and create establish cross sectional and common evaluative assessments which allow for tracking of major progress as well as challenges; strategically revise and continually improve community wide impact and achieve desirable…

In the context of this class, and after learning about the history of African-American’s, or the black race, this entire preamble needs to be re-written if we are to say that it represents all Americans, or the “People of the United States.” In no way, shape, or form does this preamble to the Constitution represent equality, or togetherness as a society. At the time that the document was signed on September 17, 1787 and ratified on June 21, 1788, the Constitution included the Three-Fifths…