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Rhetorical Analysis, “Foreign News at Crisis Point” Peter S. Goodman in the argumentative article, “Foreign News at Crisis Point,” claims that full-time staffers are losing their jobs to contracted writers. Goodman supports his argue by explaining the cause and effects of contracted writers and the issue revolving around precise news information. The authors purpose is to convey that our foreign news policy is lacking in accuracy and needs improvement, considering American workers, job security…

The North Carolina Constitution was ratified in 1971. This is the third Constitution for the state of North Carolina. The first Constitution was created in 1776 after the American Declaration of Independence came into existence and was substantially modified in 1835. We created the government for the new state. In 1868, a new constitution brought the state back into the Union after the Civil War. It currently contains 14 articles, each made up of different sections that re-organize the state…

Hamilton was a firm believer that their was a need to revise The Articles of Confederation and a convention was necessary. For instance, Bowen states, “For the ensuing seven years, Hamilton never stopped driving and pushing for a convention. He wrote letters private and public, made speeches, published a series…

Obama will be rolled back. Instead of stimulating public and private forces to meet today’s energy and environmental challenges he is forcing more of a divide. Trump is directing the United States Environmental Protection Agency (EPA ) to suspend revise or overturn the clean power plan. The clean power plan is Obama’s administrated policy that aimed at combating anthropogenic climate…

A new study shows that today’s teenage generation is less likely to succeed due to technology being too easy to access. As a student born in this generation, I know that it’s easy to look up a question, find an answer, then copy and paste it as your own work. Social media being so easy to access on any type of device, leads to students getting distracted, unfocused, and lazy in class. As a student, I am constantly noticing my cohort flicking through their Instagram feed, and liking/commenting…

Timed writing pieces are very challenging because writing the perfect piece is far from achievable. There’s always a feeling that you could’ve added more or read it one last time but sometimes time won’t prevail. Although, a perfect piece can be achievable through revision. I believe revising a piece with fresh eyes gives you a better perspective of your writing style and helps you choose things that will enhance your piece. Most of my revisions were not grammatical but for the need to add more…

Created by the Devil himself is the high school essay. With limited time and a set page number that must be reached, essays are the bane of my existence. “But essays are fun!” people say. Well, people are wrong. Essays are exhausting and emotional torture-devices that drain me of my energy and capacity for joy. However, in a high school environment, they are necessary for gaining the skillset to be an adult with writing skills and experience with deadlines. When I hear mention of an essay…

criteria, so that they know exactly what to look for and what to comment on (engagement strategy; scaffolding; learner-to-learner and learner-to-content interaction). Here, the four components of Keller’s motivation model are followed. - Learners will revise their drafts based on the comments they receive (engagement strategy; learner-to-learner, learner-to-self, and learner-to-content). - When they are done with the revision, they discuss the introduction and conclusion parts of the essay, and…

1. INTRODUCTION According to Edmund (1949, 47), traditionally risk has been defined as the likelihood of an event occurring coupled with the negative consequences of an event occurring. In other words risk is a potential problem. However, according to Valsamakis (2010, 29) risk is defined as the variation of the actual outcome from the expected outcome. If this definition is accepted, then the standard deviation is an appropriate measure of risk. Risk therefore implies the presence of…

Paying attention to my work and catching mistakes is an overall weakness as well as planning my writing out accordingly. To be very blunt, my writing could have shown growth in many ways if I just sat down and took a little more time to write and revise than the usual. I think one strength I can easy the most I’m proud of is constantly interpreting my creativity into my work. Throughout this semester I was given the option to choose my own social issue that I was passionate about, and in general…