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world couldn’t change. At the time I noticed this, those five years were one third of my life, and as I write this it’s closer to one quarter, and I hope to live to an age where it’s something around a fifteenth of the life I’ve lived. None of that revises the fact that, as a result of every cruel and narrow minded person who destroyed me, the rebuilding formed a person equipped to renew the world. It might not be quick, but someday I hope everyone will come to appreciate the tiniest…

8. According to the 2015- 2020 Dietary Guidelines, what is the recommendation regarding sodium intake for Elizabeth and her family? Elizabeth and her families daily intake of sodium should be 1,500 milligrams or less due to them being African American and having a history of hypertension in their family. 9. Assuming her recipe serves four, calculate the milligrams (mg) of sodium in one serving of Elizabeth’s casserole. - 1600 mg in one cup of cream of chicken soup - 400 mg in one half cup…

Mnuchin words he says “most economists believe that over 70 percent of corporate taxes are paid for by the workers” and there is different opinions in the economists society about this statement. The current President Donald Trump has promised to revise tax legislation- including slashing the corporate tax rate. According to Trump’s beliefs that his tax plan would increase…

publish, and update individual or shared writing products, taking advantage of technology's capacity to link to other information and to display information flexibly and dynamically. To me standard 25 asks me to use technology to make, share and revise information on a topic. My peer presentation…

In the summer of 1787 55 delegates from twelve of the thirteen original states met Philadelphia, Pennsylvania. They were meeting to revise the Articles of Confederation, America’s first national because tyranny was becoming a big problem. The delegates knew they needed to design a constitution that was strong enough to hold the nation together with a strong central government but just as importantly a constitution that would guard against allowing any one person, or group of people, get too much…

explain in the song the corruption of the education system. Let’s be honest, most systems that we live by today are corrupted, and the education system is one of them. The song “The Lost One’s Weeping” convey a message to the people of society to revise the education system that is currently used to teach the children. For someone who has been part of the otaku community, the word Vocaloid is not something new. Vocaloid is a voice…

During this semester of English W131, I have experienced both accomplishments and setbacks while learning how to improve my writing skills. Throughout the course, I have learned that writing is not only about how much information is in the paper, but also about how well the writer’s thoughts are expressed throughout the text. Practicing many different styles of writing as I did in the class has helped me tremendously with my delivery in my writing. I believe that this course was one to prepare…

Discussion Post #3 Technology has clearly changed society’s structure and culture; whereas people once stood in the grocery line reading the magazines, now they check their Facebook status. Whereas kids once fought in the mini-van during the family trip to Florida, kids now play games on their personal devices. Whereas parents once gave their children their undivided attention, their attention is now divided between their kids and their phones. Because technology has become so pervasive in the…

story. I started to add commas in my writing in order to for my writing to make sense. I had sticky notes to write my own feedback about my essay. I had my classmates to ask me what I needed to improve on for the essay to be great. I learned how to revise all my paper because of my classmates and when I took my notes. I learned how to use for note taking skills for all of my…

I leave this quarter more aware of my weaknesses than I started. However, I believe that I am also more prepared to address them on a personal level than I was three months ago. I continue to lack follow-through. My desk is littered with sticky notes and unfinished drafts. I believe that the solution to this is to carve a space in my day, every day, for writing creative work. I have made plans to adjust my schedule to address this, and while it will not go into effect until fall quarter, I am…