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thoughts and ideas to complete and revise the “context template “due on Sunday. Of course we can revise it later as we have all agreed in past meetings designing thinking in non-linear and allows us time to reflect and improve our program. I should also add my thoughts are based on the 2 learner personas, I have draft. I know we have not had time to discuss as a group and I hope to do that this evening, but regardless I wanted to start a conversation and I’m happy to revise my…

Revisionist History: Generous Orthodoxy In order to revise, one must sacrifice something for the community as a whole and willing to compromise for change. In Malcolm Gladwell's series Revisionist History in the episode “Generous Orthodoxy”, Gladwell revises the true motives of the Mennonite church community and Princeton University’s community. Gladwell effectively presents how communities vaguely represent the diversity. Gladwell interviewed church minister Chester Wanger who lost his ministry…

using information from Document Management? For example if a partner is having a 25% error rate would the partner program area know that a do something about it? If so, please add as a control. If not write it as an opportunity for improvement. Revise the control to include that Partner Program follow-up on any transaction that is outstanding for more than 30…

amount of education that I do, and most of the time they tend to make the same mistakes that affect me when I receive my paper back. Safely I take the secure route and make sure to take it to a professional for they can revise it themselves, and critique me on my errors. They revise well all the wrongs that I wasn’t able to spot for my yourself. I listen very closely to what they have to say thus it helps immensely to perfect the essay. Usually the errors they find are going to be things that…

writing because when I write something like an news article for example, so after I handed the news article in to assignment bin (ELS20 bin I guess) and it's handed back to me with some feedback and I read that feedback. It would say that I should revise it because I have some errors such as comma splices, or grammar errors and so I back then I wasn't really familiar with comma splices and I didn't know how to fix them, so now I have learned how to fix some of the errors I have made and I think…

to work on weak skills. The drill and practice programs will surround reading and writing prompts. This is something David can work on independently since he enjoys working alone on homework. Also, I would give David the opportunity to review and revise his essays via word processor (technology). Intervention steps: David can use assistant technology during free time or station time for independent work. 1.Give…

is a great tool, but for instructors to teach was a struggle. In fact, other students did not agree sense they have had lots of classes online. Therefore, I put both opinions and verify the tense, I was trying to express on my essay. Once again, I revise the grammatical errors and the spelling words. Also, make sure that my essay was written with more than 500…

tasks. I also tend to procrastinate which means I end up doing everything at the last minute, which could ruin the quality of work. Because of this I would like to work on organising myself and my work properly. I would also like to develop the way I revise and find new ways to do it, because currently the only way I find useful is reading over information, answering questions, and teaching it to others. I am also by nature a very negative person, and see the bad in myself and the situations I…

individuals. In addition there are new government powers to investigate privacy and data loss events and to obtain enforceable undertakings in the event of a breach of the laws. The new privacy laws create new Australian Privacy Principles (APPs) that revise prior obligations on how and when any personal information can be collected and how…

experience compared to my prior English courses. I learned how to edit various steps in my process of composing an essay to be able to revise the essay effectively before the deadline.The class was also required to create a schedule which outlined the various steps in the writing process. This schedule helped me to complete the essay with sufficient time to revise and peer edit and decreased the stress of being able to finish the essay on the deadline. Throughout English 101, I have learned…