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High Noon is a transitional plot, and it also gives a dreadful image of society. In transitional plot, the conflict is between the hero and society instead of the villains. Society hates the hero and wants to drive him out. However, in High Noon, the reason that the community wants to extrude Will is unreasonable. As a marshal, Will fulfills his duties to protect the town, so he brought Miller to justice. Unfortunately, Miller is released by an unspecified legal technicality. Will has planned to…

nothing like English 102 required. I was conditioned to write in very limited periods of time with barely a second to look back, which was a bold contrast to the reflective manner of college writing. I’ve discovered that taking time to revise (and reflect, and revise some more), in combination with peer reviewing, learning how to better develop my opinions into objective, convincing arguments, and acquiring the skill of researching and implementing sources to support those arguments…

progress in Digital Technologies. The main areas that held him back in his website assessment was a lack of thorough testing and folder organisation. For the Database assessment he made errors with SQL and his results were incorrect, so he will need to revise these skills to improve. He is writing a Networking report due before the end of the term. Conner is an extremely able and enthusiastic member of the group who has taken a keen interest in Digital Technologies. He has successfully passed…

Writing Strength: You have a strong thesis that clearly tells your readers your reasons for believing that two-career families are better than single-career families. Because your thesis previews what you will be arguing about in your essay, your readers know what to expect from your body paragraphs and can easily follow your argument. Well done, Diana! *Diana 10441689, you requested help with Introduction/Conclusion: Your introduction is missing some important background information about…

We write because we are reacting to something or someone. It is seen as an individual act, but it turns into a social act. It 's the way in which we respond to the people and world around us. Writing is fascinating, we are writing to audiences for particular reasons. Writing in College would be the same and even more extreme. We are adults in college and we learn more and more about the society we live in, we are given the opportunity to explore more and spread our words on paper. Our job is to…

Humanity has had many extremely hard decisions, and Tim O’Brien has gone through a choice that affects him . Having gone from abandoning his country, and not serving, and potentially saving himself, to coming back and serving in the war. Tim feels that some may think of him as a coward, and lets down his country’s expectations of him. Tim is one who is not a coward, he just believes serving can lead straight to death and despair. Having fled his country and potentially the law, he starts to…

civil rights, which in turns for the revise of immigration laws. Initiated by the Reverend Martin Luther King, American Civil Rights movement was responded with a nationwide interest in human rights, particularly for people of color living in white-controlled societies. For Vietnam War, there were largest college enrollment on record in American history students on campus to protest the war. To respond Hong Kong problems and activism, the U.S. started to revise its immigration laws. In May 1962,…

The Great Gatsby The Great Gatsby is a great American novel that was published on April 10,1925. It was written by F. Scott Fitzgerald (Francis Scott Key Fitzgerald). It falls under the fiction genre, however, the book is written very realistically and reflects many of the events that occurred in Fitzgerald’s own life as well as many of his opinions and characteristics. Fitzgerald was born on September 24, 1896 in St. Paul Minnesota. His parents were Edward Fitzgerald and Mary McQuillan…

With the different essays I wrote in my English course, I learned that revision was necessary to have a well written essay. Before taking English 1310, I strongly believed that revising an essay was optional. But as I was asked multiple times to revise my writing assessment one, I realized that revision was more than just an option. Revision was necessary to have…

“The classical definition of tragedy is greatness brought low by some fundamental flaw in one’s own character.” Tragedy, the topic of most historical events, in which the New Left has its own thoughts that relate to foreign policy. Is it possible that the United States from the 1950’s to September 11th, have botched up foreign policies, “When the history of U.S. foreign policy in the immediate post-9/11 years is more fully written, it will have to include not only the political and policy…