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introductory paragraph? The thesis sentence includes the writer’s opinion of whether the writer disagrees or agrees with the argument of Gladwell. But I think the writer needs to write three reasons for supporting the opinion in the thesis sentence. 2. Do all the supporting paragraphs back up the thesis? The writers wrote three paragraphs for supporting the thesis sentence. So I was able to easily read and understand the each paragraph. However, I think the first sentence of the first paragraph…

“The five-paragraph formula confuses and alienates students and undermines our most basic goals as writing instructors,” stated Marie Foley, as she composed her work of “Unteaching the Five-Paragraph Essay”. The five-paragraph formula has been taught to structure and give students a proper form to write an essay. Creating a simple and easy way for teachers to teach in bulks, and not have to worry about going in depth to broaden students minds. Although, it limits room for creativity,…

Five-Paragraph Construct To strengthen my misconception of the five paragraph format, I have researched information from articles and books. These sites have been an incredible way of seeing my construct in different points of views. Although I will be including an article that expresses a good feedback of this construct, I have found various facts and opinions that strongly support my misconception. Nonetheless, just because you were taught this inferior format does not mean you will show up…

amidst the introduction, the body, and the conclusion. An essay needs body paragraphs that have substantiated support; it needs a well-researched foundation, and…

1. Is there a clearly stated thesis in the introductory paragraph? -Yes. At the end of the first paragraph, the thesis sentence has three points that the writer is going to explain in the next paragraphs. 2. Do all the supporting paragraphs back up the thesis? -Each paragraphs handle different topics that the writer mentions in the thesis statement. So, the three body paragraphs support the thesis statement. Comment: While reading this essay, I was able to easily understand this essay as a…

Lookism Writing Task Introduction Paragraph: (HOOK) Beautiful Julie-Ann and her average looking sister, Mary-Ann, both decided to fill out an application for a job at Forever 21. Julie-Ann was an average C+ student, who has no working experience but knows how to take a killer selfie, while her sister graduated with 4.2 GPA all four years of highschool and had plenty of work experience, but only Julie-Ann was hired while her sister was not. Was this fair? Should people be hired or not hired…

schools which were often falling apart and included limited resources. When looking at the history of the United States, specifically the desegregation of schools in the South, Ruby Bridges was the bravest girl in America during the 1960s. Body Paragraph #1 Ruby Bridges’ family chose to send her to a white only school through which the government enforced, making her a champion of the desegregation of schools movement. To begin, “on the morning of November 14, 1960, federal marshals drove…

Body Paragraph one: In the myth daedalus the greeks believed that what goes around comes around. This is shown on page 136 Daedalus pushes his nephew Talos off the athena temple, and Talos gets turned into a bird. Then Talos in revenge leads icarus Daedalus's son into the sun killing him. What goes around comes around means that whatever you do, good or bad, will come back to you, this is also known as carma. This happens to daedalus when as his nephew in revenge leads daedalus's son into the…

Jesus Seminar Paragraph Marcus J. Borg attests in his book Meeting Jesus Again for the First Time that Jesus comprises two distinct personas; “the pre-Easter Jesus” and “the post-Easter Jesus” (20). He further implies that it is necessary for us to be able to differentiate between these identities, and cites and commends “the work of a group of scholars known as the Jesus Seminar” in dutifully analyzing and clarifying these necessary distinctions (21). Borg states that the Seminar “[has] met…

schools disagree about having sports participating in their school. Therefore, schools should keep sports because They reduce stress, They can help children to become healthier and more active, and have been proven to increase intelligence. Body Paragraph #1- Everyone has many reasons for sports to stay or go, Many experts explain their opinions about sports and what they do in your future. In 2014 Tim O’Shei tells one of his facts, such as having less stress, which makes you more confident…