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Which introduction is more effective? Explain your answer. Point out the strengths and weaknesses of each introduction. After closely examining both introductions, I would say that introduction 2 would be the most effective in this case. Based on the title of the essay I would assume that the written piece would be directed at the public. This topic on the importance of teaching children how to swim would interest parents, grandparents, teachers and community leaders that are concerned with children’s water safety skills. With this in mind, the introduction 2 draws the reader into a traumatic and possible tragic example of what can occur if a child cannot swim, underlining the importance of teaching children how to swim. Furthermore, the writer taps into the fear of every parent when it comes to water safety, drawing the reader into and enticing him to read and explore what the writer has to say about the subject (Hill,2001). However, this introduction lacks a clear and concise thesis statement that indicates to the reader what the writer will discuss within the essay. In this case, it is unclear if the importance of teaching children swimming skills will be the topic or,…

interpretation and analysis of “The Story of An Hour” by Kate Chopin (1984). This essay’s purpose was to seek for the story’s strengths and/or weaknesses. Chonguye used systematic format for her analysis and she followed the structure of the original story to ensure a progressive and logical discussion that Chonguye has created. The essay has three parts. It started with the introduction, which I think it is her “They say” part, where she put all of the previous studies about the story.…

to any subject, which in turn can lead to a lack of, or worse yet, false information. The validity and organization of an article is of supreme importance on Wikipedia, especially when comparing two articles, such as the two cities of Albuquerque, New Mexico, and Homyel, Belarus. Any city article’s introductory paragraphs usually focus on unique aspects that best exemplify that city. Albuquerque 's article uses population figures, physical landscape, and regional events. A large part of the…

Step #4: Evaluating an Argument Peer Review Instructions: Please answer each question in detail. I expect at least three to four sentences per question. Does the author present the issue in his or her introduction? Suggestions? I think their intro is pretty decent. It starts off qith a questions then goes on to answer them. Starting off with a catching question is a good start in my book. Does he start from general information and move to specifics? Suggestions? I believe so. They starts off…

If you were to ask me at the beginning of the semester what I expected from English Composition, I would not have answered with much. Previous English classes have all been repetitive, with the exception of what books are read each year. However, as the semester progressed, I began to realize how much this class had to offer. Throughout this semester, I learned many valuable skills such as drafting, crafting introductions, and critical analysis. What seemed to be a simple concept was never truly…

new staff to How to make Cold call as appropriate within market or geographic area to ensure a healthy pipeline of opportunities, Meet potential clients by growing, maintaining, and leveraging your network, Identify potential clients and research and build relationships with new clients. Policies/procedure In an orientation session company representatives discuss such topics such as dress uniforms, as well as behavior and conduct. New employees learn about rules prohibit this gum- chewing and…

Article Critique Student’s Name Institutional Affiliation Article Critique Abstract Does the abstract mention the hypothesis or purpose of the study, a summary of study design, and the main findings of the study? The article has direct abstract. Instead, a background of the study explains the need and the purpose for the study. Therefore, the background suggests that the theme of the paper is to establish the importance of lifestyle activities to the health of a person. There is no…

An Awkward Elevator Ride Norms are established rules of behavior or standards of conduct that prescribe limits of acceptable behavior according to the definition that you have given us. We were given an assignment that requires us to choose a norm and violate it. We had to choose between the following: Sing loudly (solo) on a UNA bus or in an elevator with strangers on it, position ourselves six inches from an acquaintance 's nose during a conversation, stand on a chair in a restaurant and…

Music has been a part of our lives ever since recorded history has taken place. It evolves with society to help build our culture. Just imagine not having any music or art in the Renaissance era. How would our society have looked today without the important influences? My research question for this project was How does music helps expand our interaction in society by being taught in our school system? The first thing I looked at in doing my research was Johns Hopkins School of Education…

In our group presentation, there were areas where are presentation excelled and areas where our presentation could have been improved. Our transitions from one topic to the next lacked fluidity across the board. I struggled with reading the evidence I was using to support my claim which distracted me and the audience. Otherwise, the group was able to smooth talk about their topics without much issue. If we had practiced the speech once or twice, transitions between topics would have been more…