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DCAS Reflection During my time doing the 8th grade project, I experienced many new things and learned what it is to be a good mentor and soccer coach. I had several training sessions with young girls from the ages of 7-10 years old. My ultimate goal was to help them develop a deep love for the game, and inspire them to work on their own and become better. I wanted to show the girls I trained that through hard work and dedication, it is possible to become extraordinary at anything. By coaching…

I make. Between my first two essays, one can see the considerable improvement in this specific area; nevertheless, I still struggle with it. Both mistakes are a substantial aspect of my first essay, and because I struggled so much, I was able to improve immensely. This portfolio includes my first three essays I have written this semester; I have made many improvements to them. The first essay written…

Technology in sports has increased significantly throughout the years.It is said that athletes nowadays stand in the shoulders of past athletes; this means that modern athletes have achieved greater things than the athletes who lived before them. Some of the reasons why athletes today may be superior to past athletes because the improvements in conditioning, training, technique, coaching, and diet. But one of the most important factors that contributed to the improvement of athletes is…

Not only has my analysis skills improved, my overall writing has improved as well. The method of grading these papers was really helpful. This allowed me to see what I was doing wrong or not the best way and allowed me to improve based on the comments back. From there I could improve my writing and any future writing so I knew not to make the same…

Throughout English Honors 9 I learned many subjects I did not think I would learn for quite a long time. Some of these things I did particularly well on, and some not so much. During Semester 2 I thought I generally did well on most vocab tests and grammar tests. Some needed improvement but nothing was too extreme. I thought I did very well on the Social Awareness Project, receiving a 100 percent. My essays for both Romeo and Juliet and To Kill A Mockingbird could use some definite improvement…

At the beginning of this semester, there were many goals that I need to accomplish for this semester. My goals consisted of making a 3.7 GPA, working on my writing skills, get involved around campus, manage my money, and become better at planning. When writing down these goals, I also wrote extra details on how to achieve those goals. My first goal was to make at least a 3.7 GPA. I felt that if I studied enough I could pull off this GPA. For one of my details of getting a 3.7 GPA, was that I…

members develop new skills for current or future roles, helping to eliminate road blocks to achieving goals, and encouraging continuous growth and improvement. Poor performance will be communicated and addressed immediately, allowing the employee to improve over the…

Studio 121 had made me realize the many common mistakes people make in writing and the simple solutions to help improve the writing. English 121 was a difficult class and even more so when your grammar isn’t all too great, though I was lucky enough to have been scheduled with this class also since it had helped me very much and even improved my writing. When I first began in this class, I felt that my writing was obviously lacking and because I wasn’t that good with grammar it made it worse.…

to the body paragraph where I put most of my effort and focus instead of providing more information on the introduction. But after getting a feedback from the professor, I promise to myself to always proportion the time that I spend on writing and improve the number of words to be at least 200 or more as it was mentioned in the book and also by Mr. Christopher Jone my English professor. I made a little improvement in every essay introduction that I wrote since then, not only on the word count…

expecting a lot of essays and improving your weak areas in writing. This class exceeded my expectations due to the fact I was not expecting such an adaptive course. In other words, I did not expect to use a program that will notice my weaknesses to improve them such as the Learn Achieve program. I was expecting more of an instructor to student type of feedback, although, I’m not stating this is a bad thing, but it was something new to me. In all honesty, this class exceeded my expectations work…