Draft

full-fledged roster rebuild around young draft picks. Finishing the year giving big minutes to Buddy Hield (15 points, 42.8% 3 point shooting), Willie Cauley-Stein (13 points, 8 rebounds) , and Skal Labissiere (10 points, 6 rebounds) provided a glimmer of hope for the beleaguered fanbase as the youngsters showed promise and progress.…

What was it like working toward meeting your second benchmark? My initial plans for my second benchmark was to have a first draft completed of my fake news library resource page. Working towards this benchmark was challenging because I had been trying to get in touch with a UCSB librarian before I began writing my first draft. In order to make sure I was heading in the right direction, and to get some positive feedback on my project proposal. I was able to get in touch with the Writing…

For writing project one I used the essay “Look at Your Fish: In the Laboratory with Agassiz” by Samuel Scudder. I choose this essay because it was the most relatable. I also liked how it was short and simple and straight to the point, which helped me pick up the main idea of the essay quicker. I related to the learning style of Scudder and his struggle of picking out the details. Not only was this easy relatable, but it also contained great quotes that flowed into my essay stupendous lousy. My…

claims about Wilson’s drama fences. Although your essay is a couple pages shy of the minimum essay length, what you have so far is a promising start to your essay draft. The only cause for concern I have for your draft is your last paragraph since it is incomplete, however I’m confident that you're in the process of completing your essay draft. Organization: The organization of this essay is currently on the right track, since both body paragraphs align with the thesis of the essay. Since your…

Renaissance. The school of Athens symbolizes the hypothesis that set the support for the modern thinking. In the three stories, “Raphael's ‘School Of Athens’,” “New Identifications In Raphael's School Of Athens” and “Archimedes Salutes Bramante In A Draft, For The ‘School Of Athens’” will be compared. In this paper, there are many things the writers have in common and the things that were very different in perspective. What did this change mean to Raphael to adapt from the icosahedron to the…

takes place in a neighborhood in lower Manhattan. The movie deals with the immigration of many Irish to New York as a result; gangs are created which are in favor and against the Irish. At the same time this takes place, Lincoln has made the first draft of the country in order to fight in the civil war and free slaves. The movie opening scene begins with a battle in 1846 between a Native gang lead by Bill “The Butcher” and a Irish gang who’s leader is Vallon (main character) father. The battle…

Through emailing, Dave was able to give me direction for finishing the draft of the TEAM Manual. It was decided to do a combined TEAM Manual like the Quick Start Manual. I worked to complete the draft, which mainly consisted over going over the youth and children information and working to level the activities as most appropriate for children, youth, or both. I also worked developing some questions for meeting with children’s ministry leaders to go over with Dave when we meet later in the work.…

This portfolio represents my best work, including supporting artifacts, written in the 2015 Fall 2 Semester of EN105 First Year Writing Seminar I: Critical Reading, Writing and Thinking Across Contexts course. The portfolio will take you through my writing journey that I have experienced over the last seven weeks. As I reflect back on this journey, I knew it would be a challenge before the class ever started. However, I had a glimmer of hope due to the writing I do at work and where others…

Will the Steelers be on a hunt for a safety in the draft? With the NFL Combine now over, the Steelers return to the South Side to reconfigure their draft board. The team interviewed over 60 players this past weekend in Indianapolis. One of those players was Duke safety Jeremy Cash. The standout defender formally interviewed with the Steelers on Sunday. Cash did not participate in drills at the combine due to wrist surgery he had following the season. But from what I have seen of Cash, his…

would fall asleep because I would be too tired to think of anything or I would procrastinate. I also like to sit at my desk when I write my essays because when I am sitting on my bed I would just fall asleep or get lazy and procrastinate to do my draft. So it is best of me to write my essays on my…