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After reviewing the rough draft presented to me, I have uncovered many areas need to be improved upon. In order to clearly identify the audience, the author ought to state whom the essay identifies with. One such example is: In today’s digital world letter writing has been lost on our teenagers and although their parents grew up in a world of pen and paper letter writing today’s fast pace has left them in the dust. This rough draft does not have a distinct purpose. It goes off in several…

Kennedy once said. Only thirty six percent of students that come out of high school choose a career they are interested in. Thirty percent of students enlist into the military straight out of high school. These numbers have dropped since the mandatory draft in 1973. Often, many individuals do not know what they want to do coming out of high school and want to take a couple of years off from school. This makes them lack interest in going into college and get lazy. Going into the military, you…

NHL Draft Primer: Top ten more than just McDavid, Eichel The cream of the crop won’t have to wait long to hear their names called at the 2015 NHL Entry Draft. Unlike most years, this truly is a deep draft, where numerous talents will be counted on as possible franchise players, and could possibly include every name on this list. Every year, NHL Central Scouting ranks the top players from around the globe, and the top ten from North America spotlight in what will be the final NHL Draft Primer…

The Draft has been present in American history since the 1940’s when men were drafted during both periods of peacetime and periods of conflict in order to fill the vacancies within the United States Armed Forces that could not be filled through voluntary means. And though the draft was ended when the United States Armed Forces transitioned to an all-volunteer military force the possibility of the US bringing conscription back is overwhelmingly high. Although, it may be possible that in critical…

On my first draft of the Hamlet open topic essay I only got a 5 because I failed to use much substance. I used a lot of broad language and did not dive into specifics making my point not come across strongly. When I stated a plot point I did not mention why it was crucial in accordance to the prompt. Meaning when I did have substance I failed to identify the so what, or why does it matter. For my second draft, I tried to continuously relate each point I made with the thesis so ideas were not…

trying something new, voluntary service. With the birth of an all volunteer military came an unexpected consequence; nonmilitary individuals dread the draft. The draft has been employed throughout our nations history to meet the needs of our military might, and with great effectiveness. By looking at the history, economics, and benefits of the draft we will see that it would greatly improve our nation, because it would improve the quality of our soldiers and citizens alike, while…

Rough Draft Research Paper. In Europe and the Middle East there is a migrant crisis ravaging those regions. At this time migrants from war torn countries are fleeing into European, Asian and North American countries. Some immigrants, could be terrorists looking to harm nations for their cause, so America needs to be strong. Countries need to add strong, and strict immigration policies to combat, illegal immigrants and possible terrorist attacks. Immigration before the Syrian refugee crisis.…

The number of citizens who have served in the military has decreased by over a half since 1980. There is high hostility toward the military: In that sense, we should bring back the draft. It would be an honor to fight for The United States— Air Force, Marines, Army, or Navy. This Nation is One and I believe that he or she should fight alongside their Country. There are hospitals, Rural Legal Services, and more options that do not include having to hands on fight, however it still helps. National…

LA Argument Draft In a county in Florida schools were struggling to keep students grades up along with their rank in education. The schools tried a few things first to try and raise the students’ scores. After a while they added technology into the classrooms. Since then the schools have recognized higher focus, communication in classroom projects and activities along with annual test scores. Now five years after technology ninety eight percent of the schools are ranked as A or B in education.…

Isaac Newton rough draft By: Kelsie Argueta. Did you know Isaac Newton almost gave up on his education before discovering the laws of motion? Isaac Newton was a phenomenal scientist with memorable achievements that will be forever taught in schools and in many more parts of the world. He made significant contributions to various fields of science and mathematics. He was an English physicist, mathematician, and one of the most important thinkers in the scientific revolution. He was born in 1642…