Comma

When I was a child, most of my time was spent on the computer. I wasn’t very interested with the physical computer, rather I was interested in everything the computer could do. It was more fun for me to tinker with the settings than to play games. As I got older in elementary school, I discovered website and game building sites. I built sites on my computer for everything from a fake business that sold toys to a page to host all the pictures from my semi-annual Barbie fashion shows. Although…

Hello from England, Professor! My name is Jaylinne Kêr Medina. I'm a daughter of Nyx and a vessel for Artemis, so naturally, I'm in Ravenclaw! Right off the bat, I think I should tell you that I have ADD, mild/moderate dyslexia (hence a few grammatical and spelling errors), and social anxiety, which is half the reason I go to Hogwarts online. I tried actually going for a few weeks but I ended up destroying a book from the Restricted Section by doodling in the margins and nearly had a panic…

1. Wedding is usually a long awaited event and people breed vanity around it. Wedding is usually a long awaited event and people make a big fuss over it. (“breed” means reproduce, so it does not suit.) 2. Moreover the groom and the bride are nervous about how the ceremony will be held because everybody prepares for this special day for a long time and spends a lot of effort and time on it. In addition the groom and the bride are nervous about how the ceremony will be held because everybody…

have struggled with it since the day I was first introduced to it. When I first attended my English class I was worried about messing up on every paper I wrote due to my lack of understanding on punctuation. It took me a while to learn where to place commas, periods, apostrophe, etc. I had to work hard and practice to learn how to do all that and it has finally paid off. I’m able to correct papers and be like “that’s not supposed to be there and neither is that oh this needs to be fixed to”…

Stephen Walker Instructor Wachal English 102 College Composition II 1\24\17 Passing English Composition 2 After passing English composition 101 mini students feel as though they have an easy road ahead of them, however the road has gotten much more difficult because now the course it’s a second year college level course, meaning there are improvements to be made, bad habits to get rid of and find a way to become an effective writer. To start off I’ll say what I want and expect from this course…

successful in class. The first reason that made students successful in English 99 is pink grammar packet. Students use the pink grammar packet to practice identifying the type of nouns, subjects, verbs, clauses, conjunctions, adjectives, modifiers, and comma use. Vince Lombardi says, “Practice doesn't make perfect. Perfect…

Literacy: This term Hudson demonstrated he is able to write in different formats such as diary entries, letters, stories and comics. In these various formats he was able to convey his ideas and experiences through writing and illustrations. Hudson’s illustrations are connected and support his writing. He uses an appropriate voice in his writing that allows his personality to come through in his written pieces. An example of this was in his fractured fairytale he created a story with embedded…

way they were. I, now, understand when words should be used and when they shouldn't be. I also wasn't the best with punctuation. Writing papers really helped me overcome that struggle though. As I wrote I knew when sentences should be split up by commas and semicolons by reading…

Audre Lorde was a twentieth century feminist, civil rights activist, poet and author who provided voice to those oppressed due to their identity in American culture. Lorde was born in 1934 and throughout her lifetime she lived through some of the greatest social movements The United States of America has ever seen including: The Civil Rights Movement and The Women’s Liberation Movement. However, with this, Lorde also lived in a time of social and civil injustice and all of this seemingly sparked…

In En 023 I have gained useful information that I will be using later in life. I have a much better understanding of the English writing now. Also I think that I've grown in many of my weak areas. My experience there has been amazing because I knew that this class was going to make me challenge myself to do my best. I now feel more confident going into a higher level English class and proving myself I can do it. My performance in the class can help show how much I've improved this semester.…