Comma splice

and even mathematics. Marilyn Cooper, who I will talk about later on, acknowledges that high school writing and college writing differ in that high school “writing teachers increasingly disenchanted with red-inking errors, delivering lectures on comma splices or on the two ways to organize a comparison-contrast essay, and reading alienated and alienating essays written from a list of topic sentences or in the five-paragraph format” (Cooper 364). While the ability to write for other subjects may…

one at the end for the mediator. Luckily, there was a chair in the corner just for me. I was still too close for comfort to this situation, I did not make eye contact with anyone.—I want you to go back through this essay and correct all of the comma splices—this sentence contains one-- As the parties took opposite sides of the table, the air was thick with tension. If I could have blended in with that white wall I would…