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as sources that you have used. Both of these resources are accommodating, but neither is my favorite. I find that Paper Rater is my favorite due to the detailed information it returns as it allows me to better modify my essays.…

I don’t consider to be the best writer in the world, neither to be the worst writer in the world. I have come about many strategies, learning process, and more techniques to become what is called a “better writer”. As a writer I can say that I love my paper to stand out and to make the reader say, “Wow!” because what’s the point of writing a paper or story that is boring and makes the reader fall asleep. As a writer in this course I believed that I have improved tremendously and I have dedicated…

Thank you for this opportunity to help me grow as a student and learn how to construct better papers. Starting off I’d like to say that I did take advanced placement (AP) language and composition in high school and received a B in the class, which with the grading curve associated with AP classes is weighted as an A. I learned in that class how to write better in a sense that I can form sentences that sound proper and more professional but not in a way that allowed me to get into all of the…

In my revision of my Assignment #4 I did not feel the need to change much. I added words or phrases throughout the paper that would make it sound better. I also added why The Central Building was named after William Beardshear, this is located at the end of the first paragraph in the first section titled, “History of Beardshear Hall.” I decided to take out some things. I took out unnecessary words/phrases. An example of one of the phrases I deleted is: “The overall layout and design of…

help me develop my organization on my paper, and it was developed into five paragraphs with one paragraph as the introduction, three paragraphs for the body, and one paragraph for the conclusion. In college, it is more on your own, and it is actually better not to think of the five paragraph structure as it is more appropriate to construct more paragraphs. Improving in the organization aspect…

As a result, not only did patients reported more satisfaction due to higher quality of care, but Magnet status hospitals also reported better outcomes, and lower mortality rates than non-Magnet hospitals. Conclusion It is necessary to facilitate and mandate Magnet recognition as a government program for all healthcare organizations in the United States. As highlighted in this brief, there…

move forward and improve as a student. I have strengths and weaknesses in which better me and worsen me as a student. First, procrastination is a problem to many students especially me. During my years as…

helpful to young people? Studies shown that children aged 10 to 14 were at highest risk of injuries, due to sport injuries although sports can be harmful they can also help young players interact with others, boost self-esteem, and aspire to do better and want better jobs. Have you ever stopped to think about how many athletic kids keep their grades maintained? Well actually children who participate in extra curriculum activities have a higher attendance rate, grades average, and social…

honor to speak on the behalf of the exceptional Non-Commissioned Officers that sit before you today. These notable young men and women have successfully completed the next step in developing strong leadership skills that will not only make them a better leader, but will serve as an inspiration to the Soldiers that they lead. During their time here at the Non-Commisioned Officer Academy, these Soldiers have gained valuable leadership and technical knowledge not only from their cadre, but from…

Time management, specifically related to beginning work assignments earlier. Often times with assignments, I procrastinate. This is not always done purposely but I am responsible and acknowledge I could’ve better spent my time on work assignments if I managed time properly. When I don’t start on assignments as early as possible, I become rushed towards the end and may miss something that I should not have if I started working earlier. Again, not to say I always find the right answer, however,…