Bessemer process

story over and over to really grasp the motives and feelings of the man and the girl. This, along with some research on the symbolism in the story helped me to understand the points that Hemingway was trying to get across to his readers. My revision process was extensive the following details will provide you with an insight of the steps taken to make this…

The first mask I wore had a hole in each eye the size of a dime. I started with this one because I thought I would be able to work on an assignment because I still had half the use of both my eyes, but it was still difficult. The assignment I was working on involved reading a book and then typing out answers to questions that were found from the reading. This was difficult because I had to constantly be looking back and forth between the book and my computer but I did not have full use of my…

In this essay, I evaluated the persuasive techniques in a CoverGirl advertisement. In my claim statement regarding the advertisement, said that I CoverGirl had designed a successful advertisement by using proper placement, emotional connection, and celebrity endorsement. I do feel pride in my claim statement, for the ad I was analyzing strongly use all these techniques. The aspects I would revise my claim statement would be italicizing the magazine’s name that I found my advertisement. When I…

Through IN151, I have seen that my writing has improved tremendously. From IN150, Dr. O’Conner hammered into his students’ heads that argumentative pieces of writing should include the author’s own voice and opinion in them, and with this, I was given the opportunity to put my own opinion in a piece of writing through taking IN151. During this semester, my peers and I went through extensive research to draft up an essay on a particular controversial issue. If anyone has ever said that writing…

ENC 1102 has deepened my understanding in not only social/political issues such as civil rights and gender equality, but also in writing/research techniques. I learned how to find academic sources that have been peer-reviewed in order to back up my papers with evidence and had facts. I also learned how to connect my thoughts to not only our readings but also real world events that may also back up my argument. All of these techniques will help me better my writing for future classes here at FAU…

The writing process that has worked well for me has been what I learned in grade school. I usually complete my writing in phases. The first phase in my writing process would be the prewriting phase. During the prewriting phase I take the time to brainstorm, make any lists I will need and even draw pictures that describe what I would like to write about. This helps me to better focus on my organization structure of my paper as well as helping me showcase my ideas more successfully.…

In the Spring of 2016 when I took WRTG 101, I terrified of failing. Before taking WRTG 101, I would always struggle with writing. This class has taught me many important and essential techniques to be successful in my writing career. Considering that Spanish is my first language, reading and writing are a weakness of mine. I have always been afraid of attending an English class for the simple fact of having to write essays. Thankfully, after taking this course, I have learned the basic…

of listening to both sides, decides to participate on one side. Similarly, you complete the same process when you prepare to write academically. When writing you must be prepared with evidence and in the metaphor the person does this by…

When I was in the 10th grade, my high school had begun to do something called Spirit Week. Now, if you do not know what spirit week is this is when you have a different activity for each day of the week, for example on Monday it may be cartoon day and you get to dress as your favorite character. Well, on this day it was “Throwback Thursday” and my friends and I decided that we were going to dress up as TLC. So, that day we talked about everything that we had planned to wear and we decide that we…

The three main aspects of my paper that I found myself struggling with was coming up with a clearly stated thematic message, explaining quotes without summarizing, and clear transitions. In addition to these corrections, it was essential that I corrected the multiple grammar mistakes that were made throughout the essay. When coming up with a new thematic message for the paper, I focused on creating a message that was reflected clearly in all of my paragraphs. My initial thematic statement was…